The senses deceive from time to time, and it is prudent
never to trust wholly those who have deceived us even once. R.Descartes
Your angelic heart and young mind led astray
Seduced by her alluring sight and deceitful lies
Trapped of her masked tempting wicked light
Enchanted viciously on each dangerous game
Ruined helplessly while running so hastily far
Your breath grasped, yoked by her foolish way
Grabbing your valuable genuine life till you beg
Invading your thoughts illusively with her alibi
Revealing her true self really dazed you with fear
Lost but rescued by His Light, saved from her spell
Special thanks to:
~~triple acrostic poem~~
** The triple part comes into play when
the first, middle as well as the last letter
of each line spells out the letters of
chosen word(s) or phrase(s).
The progression can be forwards or backwards.”
the first, middle as well as the last letter
of each line spells out the letters of
chosen word(s) or phrase(s).
The progression can be forwards or backwards.”
Yay!! You did it, Sis Sie! A wonderful triple Acrostic and I love the subject! You are going to literally FLIP when you see my next post ha ha! There is a similarity *winkie* A lot of that happening lately, eh? :D
ReplyDeleteThe image is GORGEOUS and I own quite a few of the exact same mask images in my files he he! Love the colors ~ perfect for V~day! Much Love, ~*Ate Me*~ he he *hugs* ♥
Hello Princess Fiona..thank you and I also didn't know you'll be publishing a triple acrostic heheeeee..just in time because I said to Sui I'll publish my assignment from her after posting my nonet..I thought there will be another challenge so right timing yehey because I have done it already hihihi..I don't mind if we have a little similarity Ms.Fiona it seems I am also having your passion on fantasy topics hihihi ;)
DeleteThe image Princess I searched how many times because I really want an image depicting a woman with many faces hehehe..
Much love too Ate ;) *hugs hugs* ✿*ﾟ‘ﾟ･✿.｡.:*
"Revealing her true self really dazed you with fear."
ReplyDeleteThis was my favorite line from your poem.
Your triple acrostic is great! It looks like you put alot of time into writing this one. :)
hello Simply Me *waving hand*..thank you..it is my first time to write a triple acrostic poem and yes it was a challenge for me finding the right words for each letter since it should be three..thank you for your visit ;)
DeleteAnother wonderful triple acrostic this morning was seen here, yeheeyy!!!:)*blink blink* :) Who is that mystery girl??? Hmmm..:)) I love this sis! :) Muaaaaahhhhh!:) Thumbs up!! :)
ReplyDeleteHello ate Rosalinda..thank you po..mystery girl?? hehehe..girls actually hahaha..it was just a pure imagination ate..but in reality persons could be really wearing different masks of themselves..deceiving people, intentionally hurting, blurting ruthless words, and betraying people..hehehe..obviously I met some hahaha..thank you for your visit ;)
DeleteWow, Sie! This is very nice. I love the message.
ReplyDeleteI have not submitted my nonet challenge yet and getting left behind. Think I'll pass on this. Too much to take up.
Hello Asni..thank you so much..it's ok sis no one get's left behind as what Princess Fiona said there are no expiration dates hehehe..we are all learning..thank you for your visit sis *hugs* ;)
DeleteI am reading a thriller. That's what I felt. Wowie! Woot! Woot! Can't help but get entrapped with this poem. Awesome work dear Sie. You took this form of poetry and did full justice to it. I am in a state which is beyond happiness. I had always wanted to promote and share creative writings. Now I feel that I have begun to do a bit on my part since you all, so enthusiastically, took up poetry forms that I used in my posts.
ReplyDeleteWell done *Clap* *Cheers* *Congratulations*
I am fascinated by the 'mystery girl'.
Sorry, I don't mean to be rude or anything but I would like to point out a probable error in your description of this poem. As per my knowledge, the explanation should be “The triple part comes into play when the first, middle as well as the last letter of each line spells out the letters of chosen word(s) or phrase(s). The progression can be forwards or backwards.”
Your formation is excellent though and the poem is very well written. *Well done!*
Hello Sui..when I finished writing it I said it is really scary having someone so deceitful as her though I have met some really hehehe..I am always eager to learn Sui..I am still new and I only started writing poems last December when we were caught by Princess Fiona's charm..oh she is not a mystery girl ok hahaha..I'm glad you liked it ;)
DeleteI changed it Sui..I should have copied your instructions..it's ok Sui because it is also for future references to others who will be reading my poem..thank you for your visit and for sharing to us another form of poetry ;) ╰☆╮╰☆╮
Hey dis is so mesmerizing.. U make me amaze with such experiments of words in ur blog.. This looks really great.. :)
ReplyDeleteHello sis Sonia..thank you so much *hugs* ;)
Delete*knock knock*
ReplyDeleteopen pweeeeeeeaseee! *teary-eyed* ..i'm scared here, earthquake so strong *huhuhu* my diapy fell off huhuhuhu.. hug me pwease hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
hon..*hugs* hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmwah..I am so worried..go home early ok..your tsunami alert is on alert level 2..call me immediately when your home..don't worry about that diapy grrrrrrr..I won't mind either if your diapy fell off what matters to me is you're safe..be safe hon ok..I am so so so worried♥๑۩۞۩๑♥ palangga taka ｡◕‿◕｡
DeleteWoW! You're making me speechless. Great work, Sie. You did it so well. For me, it's really difficult to write the triplets. I'm amazed!
ReplyDeleteThumbs up! :))
Thank you Balqis..yes it is really hard and what made it harder is inserting the chosen word in the middle and at least having the same no. of words so as to make it more readable..but sis try it..it is fun hihihi..(^_^)
DeleteHello Sie... That's a really cool poem. Very impressive. And the idea really comes out very well. The character of the mystery girl is very relatable. I'd like to try this sometime. Though I'm sure it won't be as cool as your work here.
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Hello Heidi yehey *hugs*..thank you Heidi..it does happens in reality so goes with the quote I have chosen hehehe..I know you'll write better *wink*..I'm glad you visited me again thank you....☺☺☺
DeleteInteresting Sie, i just have gone through Fiona's triplet which was amazing and now when i stumbled upon yours, i was quite marveled. You have so beauitfully written that triplet - Mysterious Girl; its a fantastic and a mind blowing poetry.
ReplyDeleteHello Elvirah *waving hand*..thank you so much and I'm super glad you liked it..thank you for your visit Elvirah (^_^)
DeleteWowww Sie you did a fantastic poem! Challenging I imagine but beautifully penned, I am amazed!
ReplyDeleteLove this story, strangely enough it reminds me of somebody - the last 4 lines are powerful. You are a genius my dear!
Write more Sie, your inspiration is precious..xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Hello sis Marie *hugs hugs*..I had someone in mind while writing this one hehehe..thank you so much sis for always encouraging me..much love from your older sis..have you checked your mail? hihihi..I have a surprise for you..thank you for your visit ─═☆☆═─
DeleteSie just stopping as I read the news about the earthquake, hope you and your loved ones are safe! You are all in my prayers. xx
ReplyDeleteHello sis Marie yes we are safe we didn't feel it here..the earthquake happened on Beany's place..he is ok..I was so worried though..thank you sis ;)
DeleteThats amazing Sie, what an interesting subject, I love the poem ! =D You write soo welll! <3 keep it up
ReplyDeletetake care
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Hello sis Dana..I'm happy you loved reading it..thank you so much and it is actually hard writing one ⊙︿⊙ but it is worth it hihihi..thank you for your visit sis ;)
Deletesis Dana..I went to your site and I think it is not on your commenting system..kindly put it back..maybe sis Dana it has to do with the contents of your site maybe you have to lessen..or I don't know but I think it is on the commenting system you are using..can you use the blogger system instead rather than disquss? I love to comment again uhuhuhu..my hon did say before my site takes time to open so I reduced the no. of my post appearing to 4 and I removed some of the blinkies on my site..I'm excited on your photo inspiration on wednesday sis..I have done my assignment yehey ｡◕‿◕｡
DeleteLost by rescued by his light like a perfect closing for this poem Sie and don't we all at times are saved by the same light?
ReplyDeleteLovely sharing and take care Sie.
Hello Ms.Nava..I agree Ms.Nava *hugs hugs*..thank you so much for your visit ;)
Deletequite amazing how you were able to utilize every letter and make it all meaningful
ReplyDeleteHello Ms.Anjuli..thank you *hugs*..the poem I did is nothing compared to your story..clap claps *blink* ;)
DeleteYou are getting so good at writing sis. I What a lovely poem sis, beautifully written. =)
ReplyDeleteHasus..sis kaw talaga..thank you so much for your visit Krizzy..I hope baby Poj is already ok *hugs* ;)
DeleteI could never use letters like that. I think it's so awesome that your imagination allows you to write poetry like that.
ReplyDeleteHello Ms.Kristen..yehey you're here..I'm excited to see what's your recipe for today..thank for your visit ;)
DeleteHi sie, wow 8 lines..you are indeed very good in this and progressing very fast.. congrats on your achievement. Have a nice day
ReplyDeleteHello Wan..thank you for visiting I know you and Balqis are busy now..thank you for having time to visit..have a nice day and smile ;)
DeleteWOW! WOW! WOW!
ReplyDeleteI loved it! Written so well! *SMILES*..Beautiful words!
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weeeeee..hello Hisi..thank you I'm glad you're here..thank you for your visit ｡◕‿◕｡
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