Once on my life's long journey
I was raised with all of my life planned
A tool to be perfect was always on my hand
Grasping every learning chart that come
Following what they want me to become.
Transforming me to be a river flowing clean
Bringing forth a perfect daughter to be seen
Everything that I did by myself was wrong
They made me believe it was for me to be strong.
Growing up with my soul on a dusty shelf
Looking down so small on myself
Waiting for my happiness giving stream
To quench my thirst of my life reviving dream.
Now as I turn my life pages
I saw what I lost in ages
Clouded with dark tomorrow's fears
Endless pouring down of my weakening tears.
Once I stumbled on my wishful dream
But my hope for love never failed to beam
I thought darkness took my chance
But he came in an unexpected glance.
Though I was imperfect and torn in his eyes
But still he loved me and listened to my cries
He melted my soul full of frozen fears
Locked my heart with his love for years.
Though all was unplanned in my kingdom
Through imperfections I had my freedom
I had failures on my hurtful dark past
But still I believe for destined love to last.
I have also my dreams to love forevermore
To build a home with him on a happy shore
Never to see again a painful cloud in our sky
No more shadows and tears to dim my eye.
✿Sie✿
weeeeeeeee..this is the cutest video I have ever seen..I am in cloud 9..love love love ;)
image source: blingee and photobucket.com
you weren't imperfect in my eyes *blink blink*
ReplyDeletevewy beautiful piece *clap clap*...don't i deserve a kiss? *pointed lips*
that's me in the last pic..aren't we gonna drown there? *worried*
ahmmmmm... i also dweam to have one truest love..and i was answered through you. Every thing happened for unknown wonderful reasons..reasons i didn't regret..'coz you were my best prize
Hello hon..weeeeee..you're the first to comment yehey..a kiss..mwahhhhhhhh..*hugs hugs*
Deletehahaha..I know I won't drown as long you hold my hand though we both don't know how to swim huhuhu..oh ok those waves are just edited maybe they are just near the shore hehehe..
You are God's gift to me Hon and as I have said I will always be here for you..I will always be true *tears*..eeeeeeee I have tears reading your last sentence..you were my best prize too..I am destined to be yours Hon..I'll wait for you because I know God answered my prayers through you ♥♥♥
eeeee...you copied my words eh..hmp! hug me!
DeleteHon I didn't copy your words..just a little bit hihihi..ok hugging you sooooooooo tight..hmmmmmmmmmm ;)
DeleteWow.. beautiful!!
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Hello Fida..welcome to my site..thank you..I'm glad you liked it ;)
Deletei love the vid...those were you and me beawrs...chheee?? we're really cute :)
ReplyDeletethe song tells what i wanna let you know *wink*
weeeeee..yes those two little bears are us..so cute hihihi..I know Hon and every word of that song is for you..let's sing it later yehey *hugs* ;)
DeleteSie this is fabulous, it melts my heart - so beautifully penned, it was like reading your life, the stages of pain, the strength that you carry with you, the love you found and the dream you wish to come true. It felt like being there holding your hand for what is the best to come........I wish you both the best!
ReplyDeleteSending my live for a good night sleep and lovely dreams. xxxxxxx
Hello Sis Marie..thank you sis ;)
DeleteYes reading my life..another series from my previous post before..a journey to my home ;)..thank you sis for always being here..I really appreciate and I feel blessed having you as my sister..lots of love *hugs* ;)
mmmm...deep meaning...
ReplyDeleteHello Rina..deep meaning..yes because my life is so deep too hehehe..thank you for your visit ;)
DeleteAnother post to remember sis..:) THIS IS GREAT!!:) From images, words and the song I love them all..:) Thanks for sharing..:) passing by to greet..:)
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you liked it..thank you..I really wrote it based on my life's experiences since I was a child till now that I have survived all my pains in life..thank you for your visit ;)
DeleteSo beautifully expressed, Sie! You've gone through so much and that's what has made you strong. I am so happy that you found someone who accepts you with all the scars and hurts and love you as you are. That is really beautiful. May God bless the both of you and your love for each other.
ReplyDeleteHello Ate Asni..*hugs*
DeleteYes, I am so blessed because he did really accepted my imperfections, he patiently understood and accepted my past hurts..love really found it's way to us..Thank you Ate Asni ;)
I just want to add here -- thank you so much for your support and cheering me on in my haiku journey. It was so nice to have you, Marie and the Princess dropping by to make my day. I love you guys for all that you've done.
ReplyDeleteMuch love and hugs.
Your welcome Ate..I am your friend and sister so I'll always be supporting you ;) I really enjoyed your Haiku journey. I learned so much from you and I'm so glad to be a part of it ;)
DeleteThis is such a heart felt and deep piece. You have captured the very essence of life and how we (none of us) can be perfect- and it is truly in our troubles and imperfections we come to know who we really are. (thus allowing others to know who we are)
ReplyDeleteLove this!
Hello Ms.Anjuli *hugs*..thank you ;)
DeleteThrough the troubles and pains that I have been through it made me realize that even though we may have everything what matters is the happiness that we feel within..I had been a perfectionist before Ms.Anjuli but when my life turned it made me see the emptiness that was inside me for years..I learned to have true happiness is accepting first MY imperfections ;)thank you for your visit Ms. Anjuli ;)
❤~*~Chapters of a life unfolds as the words address all the incidents. The feelings bloom with companionship that the hopeful heart awaited. Learning through life's adversities the strength of the dame increases. Now enjoying the love that was long due, this lovely heart's song continues. That's what I see, a true tale of victory that made it's way through all miseries.~*~❤
ReplyDeleteThis is truly a piece to remember. You have expressed so much in so little of a space. I can't help but be in awe. The accompanying images are beautiful as well.
Well wishes to you and your loved ones! (ˆ◡ˆ)
Hello Sui..you have summarized my poem so well ;)
DeleteA true tale of victory and hoping that my life would be a living testimony to every person who reads it..a message of hope and second chances in life and love.
I'm glad you liked it Sui and thank you for appreciating it..thank you so much ;)
Wow!...That's a beautiful poem Sie...
ReplyDelete"Once I stumbled on my wishful dream
But my hope for love never failed to beam
I thought darkness took my chance
But he came in an unexpected glance."
How optimistic!
You are a good poetess dear :)
Hello Valli..I'm glad you liked it..it is my life's real story ;)
DeleteThank you for your visit Valli *hugs* ;)
awwww...nikikilig ako dun sa video...
ReplyDeleteate sie..i also have dreams like what you described on the last paragraph
:)
Hello sis Clai ah ok Teacher Clai hehehe..the video is really so cute..that's my wishful dream..wishing one day you will find him soon and I wish to finally be with hon..thank you for your visit Clai *hugs* ;)
DeleteSimply superb and I can relate to all those words you have nailed down. Sounds like a journey of my own life. Wonderful work and take care Sie.
ReplyDeleteHello Ms.Nava *hugs*..I'm glad I made you smile and you can relate to what I have written..it really feels good to know that I am not alone in my journey..you have survived the journey I am in now so it is a great encouragement for me to move on..thank you Ms.Nava ;)
DeleteYou have a gift with words sis. You are able to put what you've been through and how you feel in a poem. Beautifully written and sweet =)
ReplyDeleteI am happy for you, now that you have found someone, the one!
Big hugs & much love =)
Hello sis Krizzy..where's my pasalubong hihihi..thank you sis..I have found another way how to express my emotions..big hugs too..*hugs*..salamat sa pagbisita sis Krizzy ;)
DeleteAbsolutely lovely....so poignant and heart felt
ReplyDeleteHello Ms.Ann..thank you so much *hugs* ;)
DeleteHey Sie =) I hope things go well with you. Very touching poem. =)
ReplyDeleteOh, Don't forget you are tagged: http://danasdiarysecrets.blogspot.com/2012/03/eleven-tagged-questions.html
Take care Sie, have a good day
xxx
hello Dana..thank you ;)
Deletehahaha..another tag ok I'll go to your site..thank you *hugs* ;)
I actually could relate to some of the verses in your poem. What a beautiful poem about love, and learning to love yourself, even with imperfections. Well done!
ReplyDeleteHello Ms.Mara *hugs*..I'm glad you liked it..thank you for your visit ;)
Deletehi sie, this is a very sad and beautiful poem. i can feel deep how you feel.do come over to my blog, i have tagged you in this tag game.. thanks and have a nice day
ReplyDeleteHello Wan..thank you..oh my I got tagged again hahaha..this is my fifth tag..I have lots of assignments..ok Wan I'll go now..thank you ;)
DeleteWhat a lovely and a wonderful poetry with all the beautiful and inspiratinal thoughts entwined together. Indeed nobody is perfect and all we do is to try and get perfect from each of our life's mistakes. But instead regretting over the past, if we could learn each day to improve our life and love ourselves despite our imperfections, every day will be a new day with a smile on face.
ReplyDeleteHello Elvirah..I'm glad to see you here..you're back :)
DeleteI agree improving our lives, moving on and loving ourselves despite of our imperfections..thank you for your visit Elvirah *hugs* ;)
I loved this so much sissy. Very warm and inspiring words.
ReplyDeleteHello sissy..hehehe..emote Ate..thank you sissy *hugs* ;)
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