Prayers
Silent whispers
Ascending to heaven
Strings of hope to my vale of fears
and tears
Special Thanks to:
..a Cinquain poem following with syllable counts
per line of: 2,4,6,8,2..
Pray on, then, child of God, pray on; This is your duty and your task.
To God the answering belongs; Yours is the simpler part ~ to ask.
-Chisholm-
You have forgiven me
too many times it seems
I feel I'm not what you might call
a worthy Christian after all
And though I love you so temptations
finds it's way to me
Teach me to trust in You
with all of my heart
to lean not on my own understanding
coz' I just forget
You won't give me what we can't bear
Take me out of the dark My Lord
I don't want to be there
too many times it seems
I feel I'm not what you might call
a worthy Christian after all
And though I love you so temptations
finds it's way to me
Teach me to trust in You
with all of my heart
to lean not on my own understanding
coz' I just forget
You won't give me what we can't bear
Take me out of the dark My Lord
I don't want to be there
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*wiggle wiggle*
ReplyDeletei'll be back! hihihihihi
hahaha..ok hon..go home now..I'll be waiting *wink*
DeleteI see you are enjoying poetry Sie and you are good at it, love this cinquain, prayer is special and dear to pure hearts.
ReplyDeleteHave a wonderful day and know you are always in my prayers and thoughts.
PS: I have moved all my blogs here: http://heartintransit.blogspot.com/, part of making my life simpler!!!!!
Hugs coming your way, be ready!!!
Hello sis Marie..I just can't stop writing and learning more poems..Princess Fiona really inspired me in so many ways..Have a wonderful day too sis and I have just left a comment on your site!!
Delete*hus*, I am always ready heheeeeee..thank you for your visit sis ;)
Lovely poems, Sie. I kind of miss blogging. i wish I could find more time to post a really good one like yours...
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Hello Heidi..you're here..I'm so glad you had some time to visit me..God bless you Heidi ;)
DeleteWOW!! So lovely!:)I love it sis!:)Inspired lagi, sarap!!:)muahhhh..muaaaahhhh!:) Smile!:)
ReplyDeletehasus..looks like ate your in a good mood already..always smile and just let go of those blues away ok..as what they always say.."all we need is love la lala"..thank you for visiting ate ;)
Delete*peeking*
ReplyDeletehuh? *raising eyebrows* there are people here already????
anyways, you really are getting best in your poetry.
Hihihi *pointing* that's me??? i ride in the horsey..and you too? *blink blink* i am your knight, i am stwong, i will protect youuu and our chocos too *wiggle wiggle*..and and..you look pretty praying there oh! *pointed lips*
you will always be my knight..I had this background on purpose to let our readers feel that I am now with someone who have made me stronger..together we will be in this journey for our family..hihihi!!! I am always pretty because you made me to be *blink blink* ;)
DeleteIts nice to start the week with these great post of your Sie and yes beautiful written and love this poem. Take care Sie.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ms. Nava..yes it is always nice to start our week with a moment of serenity and peace inside our hearts through prayer..take care always Ms.Nava hugs ;)
DeleteI'm quite sad cos I was here earlier and commented but there was a glitch somewhere and couldn't send my comments. :( Anyway, I'm back again, this time with a big smile! :))
ReplyDeleteYou're getting the hang of poetry writing. I can see you're good in it. This Cirquain is so divine. A very good one! Keep it up! :)
I have problems too Balqis and my hon on Princess Fiona's site..I have also slow updates on my dashboard ;(
DeleteThank you Balqis and I have many lessons to learn..have a nice day ;)
I'm so dense when it comes to poetry. One of the reasons i love coming here is that I get a dose of good poems =) Thanks for that =)
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Hello Kristeta..I always love when you visit me here..Thank you and *hugs* to baby Poj ok ;)
Deletevery sweet!
ReplyDeleteHello Ms.Anjuli..thank you and have a blessed morning..stay happy ;)
DeleteI LOVE it! You did a *beautiful* job, Ms. Sie! I see you have a castle background like I do *winkie* It's beautiful :-) *hugs*
ReplyDeleteHello Princess Fiona..hahaha I was telling my hon that is your castle aha aha and we are just passing by..it is our school of poetry..thank you Princess Fiona..I'll always be of service to you our royal highness *hugs hugs* ;)
Deleteweeeeeeeeeeeeee sweet :) super nice sissy sie, keep it up! *hugs*
ReplyDeleteweeeeeeeee..hello sissy..thank you for visiting sissy..busy busy na pretty sissy ko..*hugs hugs* ;)
Deletehi Sie, a lovely chiquain...perfectly done by a great poet like you..you do have great talent and writing skilss
ReplyDeleteHello Wan..thank you for your sweet words..thank you for your visit ;)
Delete*sigh* that was just lovely. You captured the true essence of a heartfelt prayer.
ReplyDeleteHello Ms.Ann..thank you for your kind words..*hugs hugs* ;)
Deletewonderful challenge abot "Prayer"..
ReplyDeleteloved it... tc dear...
Hello Kalai..thank you so much for visiting ;)
DeleteA very lovely and heartfelt poem on prayer!
ReplyDeleteWell done, Sie.
Thanks for sharing.
Margie :)
Hello Ms.Margie *waving hand*..thank you and I'm so glad to see you here Ms.Margie ;)
DeleteHey Sie!
ReplyDeletethis is an amazing poem, so spiritual. I don't know why your post didn't appear on my dashboard. This deserves a favorite! =D lovely
keep it up sis. I love the warmth in your blog ^.^
Hello sis Dana..I was waiting for you here..and I said to my hon last night maybe my post didn't appear on your dashboard ;(..one of my friends Hisila has also been saying my previous post-haiku didn't also appear..anyways thank you sis for visiting..thank you sis and much love *hugs hugs*
DeleteBeautifully written, as always, Sie!
ReplyDeleteI am still struggling with the word count and if I don't chicken out, I will publish mine today.
heheeeee..I know you won't Asni..I will be waiting for your cinquain hehehe.. *wink* ;)
DeleteAte sie :) my prayers for you :)
ReplyDeletemasaya ako sa binalita mo saken!!!
>> I wish you well :) mwahness
Hello Ferry..thank you ;)
DeleteSimple, yet, meaningful poem! I like it.
ReplyDeleteHello sis..thank you so much ;)
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