Monday, January 16, 2012

~Prayer * A Cinquain Challenge *.


Prayers

Silent whispers

Ascending to heaven

Strings of hope to my vale of fears

and tears

Special Thanks to:
Princess Fiona @ The Princess Passions
..a Cinquain poem following with syllable counts
per line of: 2,4,6,8,2..


Pray on, then, child of God, pray on; This is your duty and your task.
To God the answering belongs; Yours is the simpler part ~ to ask.
-Chisholm- 
 

You have forgiven me
too many times it seems
I feel I'm not what you might call
a worthy Christian after all
And though I love you so temptations
finds it's way to me

Teach me to trust in You
with all of my heart
to lean not on my own understanding
coz' I just forget
You won't give me what we can't bear
Take me out of the dark My Lord
I don't want to be there
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38 comments:

  1. beanizer_05January 16, 2012 at 5:35 PM

    *wiggle wiggle*
    i'll be back! hihihihihi

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    1. ✿Sie✿January 16, 2012 at 5:39 PM

      hahaha..ok hon..go home now..I'll be waiting *wink*

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2012 at 6:45 PM

    I see you are enjoying poetry Sie and you are good at it, love this cinquain, prayer is special and dear to pure hearts.
    Have a wonderful day and know you are always in my prayers and thoughts.

    PS: I have moved all my blogs here: http://heartintransit.blogspot.com/, part of making my life simpler!!!!!

    Hugs coming your way, be ready!!!

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    1. ✿Sie✿January 16, 2012 at 9:41 PM

      Hello sis Marie..I just can't stop writing and learning more poems..Princess Fiona really inspired me in so many ways..Have a wonderful day too sis and I have just left a comment on your site!!

      *hus*, I am always ready heheeeeee..thank you for your visit sis ;)

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  3. white witch Hi_DJanuary 16, 2012 at 7:53 PM

    Lovely poems, Sie. I kind of miss blogging. i wish I could find more time to post a really good one like yours...

    Hi_D

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    1. ✿Sie✿January 16, 2012 at 9:44 PM

      Hello Heidi..you're here..I'm so glad you had some time to visit me..God bless you Heidi ;)

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  4. SagittarianJanuary 16, 2012 at 8:15 PM

    WOW!! So lovely!:)I love it sis!:)Inspired lagi, sarap!!:)muahhhh..muaaaahhhh!:) Smile!:)

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    1. ✿Sie✿January 16, 2012 at 9:46 PM

      hasus..looks like ate your in a good mood already..always smile and just let go of those blues away ok..as what they always say.."all we need is love la lala"..thank you for visiting ate ;)

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  5. beanizer_05January 16, 2012 at 9:55 PM

    *peeking*
    huh? *raising eyebrows* there are people here already????
    anyways, you really are getting best in your poetry.
    Hihihi *pointing* that's me??? i ride in the horsey..and you too? *blink blink* i am your knight, i am stwong, i will protect youuu and our chocos too *wiggle wiggle*..and and..you look pretty praying there oh! *pointed lips*

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    1. ✿Sie✿January 16, 2012 at 10:18 PM

      you will always be my knight..I had this background on purpose to let our readers feel that I am now with someone who have made me stronger..together we will be in this journey for our family..hihihi!!! I am always pretty because you made me to be *blink blink* ;)

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  6. Nava KJanuary 16, 2012 at 10:33 PM

    Its nice to start the week with these great post of your Sie and yes beautiful written and love this poem. Take care Sie.

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    1. ✿Sie✿January 17, 2012 at 7:53 AM

      Thank you Ms. Nava..yes it is always nice to start our week with a moment of serenity and peace inside our hearts through prayer..take care always Ms.Nava hugs ;)

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  7. Balqis DBJJanuary 16, 2012 at 11:23 PM

    I'm quite sad cos I was here earlier and commented but there was a glitch somewhere and couldn't send my comments. :( Anyway, I'm back again, this time with a big smile! :))

    You're getting the hang of poetry writing. I can see you're good in it. This Cirquain is so divine. A very good one! Keep it up! :)

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    1. ✿Sie✿January 17, 2012 at 7:56 AM

      I have problems too Balqis and my hon on Princess Fiona's site..I have also slow updates on my dashboard ;(

      Thank you Balqis and I have many lessons to learn..have a nice day ;)

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  8. Kristeta  (kalokang Pinay)January 17, 2012 at 2:06 AM

    I'm so dense when it comes to poetry. One of the reasons i love coming here is that I get a dose of good poems =) Thanks for that =)

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    1. ✿Sie✿January 17, 2012 at 7:57 AM

      Hello Kristeta..I always love when you visit me here..Thank you and *hugs* to baby Poj ok ;)

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  9. AnjuliJanuary 17, 2012 at 6:13 AM

    very sweet!

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    1. ✿Sie✿January 17, 2012 at 7:58 AM

      Hello Ms.Anjuli..thank you and have a blessed morning..stay happy ;)

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  10. --January 17, 2012 at 7:26 AM

    I LOVE it! You did a *beautiful* job, Ms. Sie! I see you have a castle background like I do *winkie* It's beautiful :-) *hugs*

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    1. ✿Sie✿January 17, 2012 at 8:00 AM

      Hello Princess Fiona..hahaha I was telling my hon that is your castle aha aha and we are just passing by..it is our school of poetry..thank you Princess Fiona..I'll always be of service to you our royal highness *hugs hugs* ;)

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  11. chachuchoJanuary 17, 2012 at 10:27 AM

    weeeeeeeeeeeeee sweet :) super nice sissy sie, keep it up! *hugs*

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    1. ✿Sie✿January 17, 2012 at 11:25 AM

      weeeeeeeee..hello sissy..thank you for visiting sissy..busy busy na pretty sissy ko..*hugs hugs* ;)

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  12. cookingvarietiesJanuary 17, 2012 at 11:29 AM

    hi Sie, a lovely chiquain...perfectly done by a great poet like you..you do have great talent and writing skilss

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    1. ✿Sie✿January 17, 2012 at 12:16 PM

      Hello Wan..thank you for your sweet words..thank you for your visit ;)

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  13. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2012 at 11:29 AM

    *sigh* that was just lovely. You captured the true essence of a heartfelt prayer.

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    1. ✿Sie✿January 17, 2012 at 12:19 PM

      Hello Ms.Ann..thank you for your kind words..*hugs hugs* ;)

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  14. kalaiselvisblogJanuary 17, 2012 at 7:34 PM

    wonderful challenge abot "Prayer"..
    loved it... tc dear...

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    1. ✿Sie✿January 17, 2012 at 9:28 PM

      Hello Kalai..thank you so much for visiting ;)

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  15. MargieJanuary 18, 2012 at 1:40 AM

    A very lovely and heartfelt poem on prayer!
    Well done, Sie.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Margie :)

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    1. ✿Sie✿January 18, 2012 at 7:40 AM

      Hello Ms.Margie *waving hand*..thank you and I'm so glad to see you here Ms.Margie ;)

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  16. The Muslimah CornerJanuary 18, 2012 at 3:16 AM

    Hey Sie!
    this is an amazing poem, so spiritual. I don't know why your post didn't appear on my dashboard. This deserves a favorite! =D lovely
    keep it up sis. I love the warmth in your blog ^.^

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    1. ✿Sie✿January 18, 2012 at 7:44 AM

      Hello sis Dana..I was waiting for you here..and I said to my hon last night maybe my post didn't appear on your dashboard ;(..one of my friends Hisila has also been saying my previous post-haiku didn't also appear..anyways thank you sis for visiting..thank you sis and much love *hugs hugs*

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  17. My Arabic JourneyJanuary 18, 2012 at 10:12 AM

    Beautifully written, as always, Sie!

    I am still struggling with the word count and if I don't chicken out, I will publish mine today.

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    1. ✿Sie✿January 18, 2012 at 10:17 AM

      heheeeee..I know you won't Asni..I will be waiting for your cinquain hehehe.. *wink* ;)

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  18. Unstoppablepedestrian.blogspot.comJanuary 18, 2012 at 1:12 PM

    Ate sie :) my prayers for you :)
    masaya ako sa binalita mo saken!!!

    >> I wish you well :) mwahness

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  19. Divina JoyJanuary 18, 2012 at 5:12 PM

    Simple, yet, meaningful poem! I like it.

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