Friday, February 3, 2012

**Inner Peace...~ Nonet poem challenge~



His 
Awesome
Guiding light
Glowing so bright
Watching with His might
Brings comfort on each fight
Trusting Him to do what's right
Ending life's battles far from sight
Leading weary souls soar on high flight
 Sending His message so true and clear
Her broken heart who has a tear
Now a life beaming with cheer
A soul longs most to hear
His oath to hold dear
Daughter I'm here
Always near
Never
Fear

~Sie~
 
 Special Thanks to: Princess Fiona
Nonet Poem (in reverse) following with syllable   
counts per line of: 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1 


*Trusting our Lord's faithfulness dispels our fearfulness*

Hello everyone this is again a challenge from our dear friend and mentor Princess Fiona  She has always inspired us to write and discover the hidden talents that we have. I have never written any poem before but when Ms.Fiona introduced to us Fibonacci poetry last December we were all encouraged to try. On goes with the different challenges which gave us a quick start and a push to challenge ourselves in writing poems with different forms.


I am a proud student of her school of poetry hihihi..I have still many things to learn and I am always eager to know more..it is one way of showing my appreciation for all the help she has done. I don't know if it is right but I tried and I enjoyed writing it. It is my little contribution for her new form of poetry. For the instructions of this poem kindly visit her awesome site @ The Princess Passions..enrollment is still going on..no fees it is for free hihihi..so Come And Join The Fun weeeeee..


Ms.Fiona my hon and I are done with our assignments..kindly consider my work also his..

so we will have same grades hihihi..can we have are chocos pweeeease..






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60 comments:

  1. WoW!!! You did an AMAZING job, Ms. Sie!!! The rhymes are lovely and you managed to keep the same rhyme scheme on each Nonet! You chose a wonderful topic and I LOVE the image!

    I'm SO touched by your inclusion of me in the post! That is SO very *special* and I'll always treasure these words ~ thanks so much, Sis Sie! ♥

    I'm giggling at the picture of you and Beany! Ha ha! Oh the words are so funny too! Beany can't have chocos unless he participates :p It might give him incentive to start he he!

    I'm smiling SO big right now ~ weeee! Thanks so much for your enthusiasm, dedication and never failing to deliver quality 'homework' (he he)! A++

    Much Love & Gratitude :-) x0x

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    1. Hello Princess Fiona weeeeeeeee..*hugs hugs*..I'm so glad you liked it..I changed the image 3 times because I can't get the right sizes..the two previous pix are too big so I just settled for this one and after choosing it I did realized it was appropriate for my topic..Honestly Princess Fiona the tricky part was on shaping it like a diamond ahay I have to edit it twice just to make it look like one ;)

      Thank you so much ate Fiona for always inspiring us..I purposely made my note below to encourage my friends to join us because I am really enjoying your school hihihi..

      ahay Please Ms.Fiona kindly give my hon chocos but if you don't want too I'll just give him my share because I love him ahay..*giggles* ;) hahaha..

      Lots of Love too from me and Beany Ms.Fiona *blink blink*

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    2. OK, he he he! Beany is giving me love via you so how can I refuse? *winkie* I'll send a portion to him also ~ my heart is soft like truffles he he he! ♥

      P.S. ~ I can relate to the challenge of the shape ~ that's what takes up time ~ lots of formatting ;)

      P.S. ~ You can alter the size of an image to suit your own needs. I'll give you directions in a mail if you need it? Probably tomorrow since I have lots of comments to respond to :-)

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    3. yehey thank you Princess Fiona my hon will surely smile reading this hihihi..I have no second thoughts Ms. Fiona you have a genuine kind heart ahay I remembered your mails..your life is really an inspiration to me ♥

      Yes ate Fiona making it a shaped poem takes a lot of time but at the same time I was saying yehey after achieving it and my kids would go yehey and they go wiggling hahaha..I am always with my kids when I am choosing images and editing my posts Ms.Fiona it is one of our bonding moments..they are sitting on both sides while I'm choosing all my glittered images and they sooooo love it *blink*..

      They know the name of my friends here and they say ay nanay (mom) you have another challenge and it is hard..choose this pix..they also always look for my hon's comment and they say..there's dada because Beany wants to be called their dada or father hihihi..

      Oh I would love to have these tips from you Ms.Fiona I'll be most humbled to accept it from you..weeeeeeee..I'll be waiting for it and thank you so much Princess *blink blink* ;) *hugs* ;)

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    4. hon! i didn't remember I'm sending love to Lady Fiona! hmmmmm..alright! send her then for choco's sake!

      Lady Fiona! Don't you like our school uniform? Look! my hon is pretty and I am ahmmmmmmmm...cutest!

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    5. hahaha..your sooooooooo cutie cute cute *hugs* ;)

      weeeeeeee..I'm pretty because I am beside you..ok give me more chocos hihihi ;)

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  2. I simply adore your rhyming Nonets. I'm going to have to try to do one when I get the courage.

    I found Princess Fiona's blog today. Now, I too can be part of her "School of Poetry." :)

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    1. weeeeeeee..hello Ms. Mara yehey your joining us *hugs hugs*..so you'll be my classmate too hihihi..I'm glad you liked it..thank you for visiting Ms.Mara and for visiting Princess Fiona's site..see you there *blink* ;)

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  3. This is beautiful, Sie! The message is so meaningful and the image is stunning.

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  4. wow!!! teacher Fiona must be proud to you Ate sie :) biruin mong napaka husay mo ng gumawa ng poem!! with extra effort pa sa writings ahh!!! elib ako!!!

    >> congrats Ate Sie!! salamat sa comment at sa dalaw!!!
    >> mwahness

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    1. thank you Ferry..she is a great mentor and I am just following her lessons..your welcome Ferry..*hugs* ;)

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  5. *panting*
    i'm heeeeeeeerrre hon! *waving*
    yey! that's a perfect shape..and my favorite too..the STAR! hihihi
    you rhymed every last word pretty well..i know you can do every challenge. Hmmmmmmmm.....but Lady Fiona won't give me chocos! Yup she gave me a 'lil piece but it's expired already! hmp!
    i'm on the 5th spot! my fave number! *blink blink*
    hey Lady Fiona! Don't get used staying there above! i still own that! i just let you borrow coz of your choco, your expired choco! hmp!

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    1. yehey you're here..*hugs hugs*..I know your so busy so thank you hon for giving time to visit my site weeeeeeee..perfect shape ahay it is not a star it is a diamond hahaha..I just love making it sound the same hehehe..like hmmmmmmm..I have more..

      Hon please hold me tight
      Hug me with all your might
      I'll be missing you tonight
      Can you come to kiss me goodnight?
      Don't be afraid I don't BITE
      oh ok just a little..Slight

      heheeeeeeeeeee..

      OMG Ms.Fiona gave you expired chococ..that explains why I have tummy aches..I ate it too uhuhuhu..

      *hugs hugs* ♥♥♥

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    2. i'm not afraid of your bite hihihi
      yeah! she gave me expired chocos..hmp hmp!
      see? she's not showing here 'coz she's guilty! she committed us tummy crime! hmp!

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    3. aha your not afraid..so I'll transform into a vampire instead awooooooo..how many bitse do you want hahaha..

      Hon I don't bite
      Except in a fight
      If a woman hugs you on sight
      I'll bite her with my might

      ..hehehe hon our Princess Fiona is still sleeping ssssshhhhh..I know she'll be back here to read your comment hehehe..hon I am really having tummy aches now for real uhuhuhu!

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    4. i want bite kishes honey vampire!

      i am faithful to you my honey vamp
      with your bite kishes i will jump
      Pwomise pwomise--Beany should not be dumped
      inside your hearty i go bump bump bump

      hihihi..i hardly make rhymes now, i lose my powers already *sniff sniff*

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    5. hahaha..I know your faithful hon and I am most faithful too hihihi ;)

      I am faithful to Beany
      Because he is as sweet as honey
      He always makes my day sunny
      Making my life happy and funny
      I love hugging him like a bunny

      ..you are still the cutest Hugs* ;)

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  6. I have heard about this style of poetry, Nonet at Princesa Fiona blog. Beautiful the way you have caught the style and wrote your words amazingly.

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    1. Hello Elvirah welcome to my site..I am one of her students hehehe..thank you so much for visiting Elvirah and I'm glad you liked it..I visited your site and followed you as well ;)

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    1. Hello sis Izdiher *hugs hugs*..HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY..I wish for your unending happiness for a woman with a humble heart..much love from me ;) Thank you for your visit sis ;)

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    1. Hello Rina..ahay thank you so much for your visit I know your so busy..thank you..look I am smiling seeing you here *hugs*..always take care of yourself ok ;)

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  9. My mind is filled with the word nonet. For the past couple of days it's all that I read. Everyone has so enthusiastically taken up this challenge by one and only Princesa Fiona. She has a way to make us go gaga over her creations.
    I am seriously tired of praising everyone. Damn it! Why do you write so beautifully? Have mercy because I have run out of compliments. I can't spell words anymore. I have gone blank, so this is all I can give-
    ❀happiness❀ ♥lօѵҽ♥ ☆light☆ *to* ❣you❣

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    1. Well Sui welcome to our group hahaha..we are just caught by Princess Fiona's charm and yes a double yes we are captivated by her challenges..it started last December when she introduced to us Fibonacci poem and we who just visited her site just gave it a try and then wahhhhhhhhh..we all had a Fionacci Fever hahaha..thank you for your compliment Sui..but honestly you write so well and deep which a good poet should possess ;)thank you for your visit..my assignment from you comes next..I hope I did it right ahay ;0

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  10. Hey that's lovely.. U have taken the challenge of ~*Princesa Fiona*~ and done so well in it.. I just loved the rhymes and it has come out really beautifully:)

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    1. Hello Sonia..*hugs*..thank you..come and join the fun sis..this is one of the reasons why I am now so happy and smiling through my virtual world..I am learning *blink* thank you for your visit ;)

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  11. Wow! Sie, you always write interestingly. A great job! Love your Nonet. I'll give another A+++. :)

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    1. Hello sis..we have been missing you *hugs hugs*..thank you busy baker bee..oh I'll be waiting for your nonet sis..thank you for visiting ;)

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  12. Sieee
    THIS IS AN AMAZING POEM!!!!! I love LOVE the rhymes, the way you put them perfectly together!!! =D I love the picture too, I LOVE red hair! =D
    So peaceful Sie, I love the tranquility in your poems and posts, keep up the work Sie =) Cute baby pics hehehe
    xxx

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    1. Hello sis Dana..weeeeee I'm so glad you loved the rhymes I got my tongue twisted ehe ehe..I love the pix too..oh the cute babies hehehe because my hon and I are both cute in real life heheeeee..thank you for your visit sis Dana and I'm finished with my assignment from you it is ready to be published on Wednesday *blink blink* ;)

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  13. I think you did something special here Sie, first your picked up a wonderful subject, then you kept the rhyme and you said it all in coupled of lines.
    I am amazed, your poetry is so special. Thank thank you for sharing it with us so we can enjoy the beauty of your heart.
    May you be blessed my dear sis.............sweet dreams of love and a goodnight kiss!

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    1. Hello sis Marie *hugs hugs hugs*..I just can't get hold of what I feel inside sis and that is my longing for my own inner peace..so I have chosen a topic that expresses my thoughts at this moment..thank you also sis for being one of my inspirations in my life's journey..much love and goodnight sis mwahhhhh ;)

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    2. You will find it Sie, you will. Take care my dear friend and have a lovely, relaxing week-end. xxx

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    3. Thank you so much sis Marie *hugs hugs hugs* ;)

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  14. I agree with all our friend sis, you've done another great and special poetry..:) I really love it sis..:) Very inspiring..:) Muaaaahhh!! Lakas tama dito..hehehe dito sa puso ko.. hehehe Love the image too, it's super...:) Keep it up sis..:) Muaaaahhh..:)

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    1. Hello ate..ahay you have been touched by the message of my poem hmmmmmmm..so ate you're really on emo mode hehehe..thank you ate and you are really busy..with whom or why? never mind just keep smiling and whatever it is always hold on ok..we can do this hehehe..thank you for your visit po ;)

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  15. I am all in for the connection of god with how we feel inside us Sie. Thats a wonderful sharing and very touching to read each and everyone of the word you have shared. Take care Sie.

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    1. Hello Ms.Nava..thank you so much Ms.Nava..Have a nice day and stay in love hihihi..*hugs* ;)

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  16. I love the meaning - such a powerful piece- and the way you kept to the rhyming scheme throughout. As always you made it look beautiful as well- all very difficult things to accomplish but you did them!! Good job!

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    1. Thank you Ms.Anjuli..I always smile when I see all here..thank you for encouraging me to write more..I am so happy you liked it..keep smiling and God bless you and your family *hugs* ;)

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  17. How can someone be so good man? our writings inspire me.. U n Fiona, you guys rock.. This was AMAZING :)

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    1. woooootttt..Hello Confused Soul you're here *hugs hugs*..I'm so glad you have been inspired through my writing..that's my one way of making my friends smile and at least reading my messages gives them a reason to love the life that God has given to us no matter what hihihi..*hugs*..thank you for your visit ;)

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  18. Awww, i really like this one.
    You are getting better by the day, sis. It's always great to discover talents that you don't know you have. But if you ask me, I think you're a natural!
    Have a lovely weekend =)

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    1. Hello Krizzy..it is so nice to see you here..I hope baby Poj is already well..oh yes sis I have never written any poem before but Ms.Fiona did gave us an opportunity to let us see beyond our expectations..thank you for your visit sis and stay as lovely as you are..pakiss kay baby Poj ha..paggaling sya *hugs* ;)

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  19. Wow! You've done such a nice job. The nonet is perfect and each line is so beautiful! I loved it!
    Cheers!!!!
    Keep Smiling :)

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    1. Hello Hisi *waving hand*..Thank you so much sis I'm glad you loved reading it..keep smiling too and stay strong ok *blink* *hugs* ;)

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  20. *waving* *wiggling butt*
    look hon! i got more chocos! Lady Fiona is hesitant to give me so..hmmmm...i get them myself w/o her knowing *evil grin*..don't pinch me, i'm just afwaid she'll give us expired chocos again so i get them myself..it's for our safety anyway! *blink blink*

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    1. hahaha..ssssssshhhhhh..you should have text me so she won't see you telling me you got some of her chocos *blink blink* ;)

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    2. huh? *looking around* i can hear her snoring *chuckling* , she can't see this..she won' come here..and and..she can't get these chocos when they're already inside our tummy *wide grin*

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    3. hahaha..yes I know Princess Fiona won't be coming here she is busy preparing on her new post she told me ssssshhhhhhh..let us not disturb her..oh no maybe another challenge so hon do the next one ok hihihi..can I wish a Lindt choco bar? maybe it will be my next prize on her next challenge yehey ;)

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  21. Wow, you're such a great poet, Sie! I wish I had your talent- even just half of it :)

    Stay happy and inspired! ;)

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    1. Hello Peps..I am just starting and I enjoy writing some of my thoughts through poetry..thank you for your visit Peps *hugs* ;)

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  22. That is a lovely poem. It's great that you are stretching yourself, reaching to improve your writing skills. I admire your effort.

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    1. Hello Ms.Kristen oh you're here..I love your recipe on Ms.Ann's site..ahay I'll surely visit you now..thank you for visiting my site *hugs* ;) I'll visit you now and I am excited to learn new recipes yum yum ;)

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  23. The rhyming is wonderful :) Soon you'll also become a teacher like Princess Fiona :P

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    1. Hello Philo..I'm glad you liked it..*hugs hugs* thank you for your visit..keep smiling ;)

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  24. sissy, I love this one so much. If ever I make one for my boypran he will definitely happy but I am no good just like you. weeeeeeeee I love it much sissy. keep it up. I miss you pretty sissy. hugsssssssssssssssssss.

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    1. Hello pretty sissy..weeeeeee..*hugs*..thank you so much for visiting me..I know you're sooooooooo busy but you're here..smile si Ate oh..salamat sissy..miss you too ;)

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