Thursday, February 9, 2012

**Pushing my limits..~Rhyming Bow Poem~

 The
Strong
Wind blows
With sorrows
Dark tomorrows
Suddenly time slows
Her weak tear shows
Fears strength flows
Pierced  bows
Grows
Inside
But COURAGE
Beside
 Her
Soul lives
And  believes
Pains can deceive
If her mind conceive
Faith  in  His  name
Redeemed shame
 Hopes flame
Through
Her
Sie

This Poem is for Inspirational Purposes Only


Hello dear friends..last week Princess Fiona @ The Princess Passions gave us an Ultimate Challenge..she created her own form of poetry - Acronet -. Kindly visit her site for a CLEAR EXAMPLE OF THIS CHALLENGE .

I was one of her students who participated on every challenges that she has for us. But this time her challenge was not to do her Acronet. Her instruction was to do our own form of poetry and not to join two forms of poetry together. I was into joining also two forms but my Hon Beany and Ms.Fiona encouraged me to do a unique one. I was hesitant at first but I did tried my best hihihi..

So friends here's my first attempt to do my own form of poetry..I'll be naming it 

Rhyming Bow Poem -..in this form the poem should be Formed Like a Bow And each lines should Rhyme And the chosen topic in Bold letters written at the middle part..in my poem the word is COURAGE. 
The syllable counts per line are: 1,1,2,3,4,5,4,3,2,1,~2,3,2~1,2,3,4,5,4,3,2,1,1

This is my little contribution to your ultimate challenge Princess Fiona and thank you so much to you and Beany for always encouraging me to leave a mark, be unique and be a person with excellence and integrity.As what Princess Fiona said "Art is an exhibition to inspire imagination beyond the realm of replication". I hope you all enjoyed hihihi ;)

BUT Before I go I would like to invite you all my dear friends to kindly visit my hon's site..he has written his poem for me..it is his gift for our 17th monthsary..I'll be more than glad if you'll visit him and leave a comment..here is his site @Beanizer's Instincts.. Thank you soooooooooo much ;)




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66 comments:

  1. Wooohhhooo!!! You've done it! The poem is beautiful...I loved it! *smiles* I liked the rhymes....PERFECT!

    Keep Smiling :)
    Loads of Love
    xoxox

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    1. Hello Hisila..thank you..I'm so glad you liked it and it made you smile..keep smiling too..*hugs hugs* ;)

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  2. *♫*Speechless, speechless, that's how you make me feel*♫*

    Oh my Sie! You have outdone yourself this time. When I saw your update the first thing that came to my mind was, "are they super humans". What's up with you people? How can you come with with such dazzling posts every single day without a fail? Gosh, I am sweating here even though it's such a cold weather.

    Might as well get on my knees and bow a hundred times for the *Evergreen Queen*. Syllables cause a mayhem for me but you just invented another form specializing in it. Oh my!!! I need fresh air to calm myself. See you later!

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    1. Sui I am normal..I am just hanging on the strings of Princess Fiona's talent in writing poems..I have been following her instructions not because she is my mentor but I look up to her because she has been one of my true friend and sister..Evergreen Queen??..don't bow..thank you for your compliments Sui..but I prefer to be called my hon's queen.

      Syllables also cripples me as what I always say to Princess Fiona I am afraid of syllables but when her challenges came with counting syllables I was into it and it is fun. You are into Acrostics and I know each one of us has our own unique fields in poetry. I am still new in writing poems and I have so much to learn from all of you. Calm yourself Sui don't worry I'll be having my next post after a few days and it won't be another form..thank you for your visit.

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  3. Sie this is such a beautiful piece...........words are falling me. I too need some fresh air.
    Only know I am captivated by your inspiration and your talent. You are a precious gift to every one who cross your path. You will leave a mark, at least in my life.
    I don't think I can copy your form, it's too unique, too special. It is so YOU.
    Sending my love my dear sister. xxxxxxxx

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    1. Hello sis Marie..my soul sister *hugs hugs*..thank you so much..Princess Fiona taught us well plus an inspiration from my hon and a dose of your genuine kind words in my mails gave me a boost to push my limits..I am thinking of pushing my self more oh joke hahaha..

      You are always a precious gift also to me..you, Dana and Cha cha have been like my true younger sisters here..I am an only child so I really hungered for a sister's love and Ms.Fiona is our older sister oh my hihihi..

      I did this sis just in reply for Princess Fiona's challenge..I'll be waiting for your own creation too but what's more important for me is to leave a mark

      * To Touch Lives * in everything that I do..just spreading friendship and inspiration to each heart that crosses my path..
      *Building Relationships* ;)

      Thank you so much sis Marie..oh yes you can call me Ate if you want too..it means older sister in our dialect hihihi ;)

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    2. Oh great so how are you Ate! Love it already............I have to think now about creating something, it will take time, but I can, yes I can...........It feels someday you are my double, we think, feel some things at the same time! That is so great, fantastic. I thank God every day for such blessings...........and you know what your words just help me go through another sad mood week!
      Take care Sie..xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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    3. weeeeeee..I have another younger sister hihihi..yes that's my sister yes you can and I'll be the first person to be proud of you though the way on how you handle your life exceedingly inspires me Marie..sis kindly check your mail..take care always sis Marie..Ate Sie Loves you ;)

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  4. *holding pillow* i'm up to bed but i remember my bow tie..i left it here i guess..hmmmmmmmm...*clap clap* i knew it from the moment i asked you to make your own form..
    ahmmmmm...Hon, no need to introduce me to them, i update my site once every 6 months, i'm afraid to stuck them in my most updated post..
    ok ok,,i'll go to bed na *wiggle wiggle, hugging pillow*

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    1. your bow tie..you left it here hon..here oh I'm holding it hahaha..that's why I made a bow like shape poem because I know you like it..thank you so much hon for always encouraging me to do my best..you always bring out the best in me..I have never written any poems before just this past few months..Princess Fiona have taught me well and you have been my inspiration ;) ..

      I am proud to introduce you to my friends so they will know the man behind my smiles hihihi ♥♥♥ .. Your Love makes me shine and I my heart goes beat beat and my eyes go blink blink then I go wink wink..oh corny *pout*..*hugs hugs*

      Hurry up I am waiting for your call..I'm tired I need fresh air too hahaha..cpr please hahaha *blink*

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  5. so nice Sie! How do you do it ? =) You are so good at decorating too hehehe ^.^ Lovely work! Keep it up

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    1. Hello sis Dana..how do I do it??..ah ok I am munching chocos while I am writing poems sssssshhhhh..that's my secret hehehe..but honestly writing poems has been my one way of pouring out my real emotions in life and it really helps..Princess Fiona is right..like what she said in her ultimate challenge post doing 100% originality through our own artistry and imagination was really an achievement for me weeeeeeeee..like you sis Dana contributing and supporting to your photo project gave me a way to make you smile..leaving a mark to each person who has been good to me..

      oh ok blah blah wahhhhhhhhhh..how come my reply was long compared to your comment hehehe..

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  6. Wow this looks fancy :) I love the way you formatted it it looks so professional and... fancy :P I love your poems

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    1. Hello Taytay..thank you..I'm happy you liked it..keep smiling..thank you for your visit

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  7. Wow this is amazing!!! I was looking at it wondering what new form of poetry this was- figuring out the format etc- and then I read what you said that this is YOUR OWN CREATION!!! WOW!!!! I mean it is hard enough to follow poetical forms- but for you to create your own, this is amazing!!! REALLY GOOD JOB!!

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    1. Hello Ms.Anjuli you're here yehey *hugs*..wow I got you curious on the name of this form hihihi..I had a hard time thinking about the name and I even consulted my hon and we were laughing about it..inventing the right one hahaha..yes Ms.Anjuli..Princess Fiona did encouraged us to try and write our own form like what she did on her Acronet..thank you so Ms.Anjuli..oh your Peking Stitch story is more amazing..thank you again for your visit ;)

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  8. Wow!!! Muaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!! I love it!!:) Wonderful and very creative sis!:) Yeah, you've done one great with your acronet! not related with sakuragi..mmmmm... muahhhh!! hehehe, shakin all over again, hmmm you know why, right?? well, gettin hot in here..Because of power interruptions! hehehe.. Ok, double thumbs up up in away!!:)

    Yeah.. i love it! :)

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    1. I didn't do an Acronet it is Princess Fiona's creation..what I did was a Rhyming bow poem..oh you have no lights so you're very fast to do a double butterfly cinquain with out lights that's new and I can't do that..and I did saw it published hours before I published mine which I told you in the morning I was creating one..anyways thanks for passing by.

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  9. WoW!!! I am totally beside myself, Ms. Sie! You are the first one to attempt this unique challenge of mine and I am simply FLOORED at how successful your attempt is!!! This is EXACTLY what I had hoped those participating would attempt to produce.

    I have to say it exceeds any expectation I may have had for this particular challenge! You have the set the standard at an extremely high height and I couldn't be more proud of you for doing this! I never doubted your ability to achieve this and it makes me happy knowing that my encouragement assisted you in your success!

    I LOVE the words, rhymes, form, presentation, colors! WoW!!! It is perfection I would also like to add that I hope everyone reading this knows that you've only been writing for less than three months! You have nailed every challenge! You were born to be a poetess ~ I know pronounce you, Poetess Sie he he. Thank you so much for participating in the special challenge. Your instructions are flawless and thanks for the insertion of the ™ {|:)

    If I may, I'd like to add this link to my Acronet™ Ultimate Challenge post as a prime example of what one can achieve with vision, labor, talent and CREATIVITY!!! Bravo to the Rhyming Bow™ ! (hey that rhymed too he he) ;) ~ Much ♥ ♥ ♥ Love ~

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    1. Hello Princess Fiona..I'm so glad you like it..I am the first one to do it yehey..so can I have chocos for my hon? we are actually discussing on the rhymes and I was asking him..hon what rhymes with this word hahaha..my kids where even laughing while I was doing it because I was counting the syllables with my fingers..

      Yes your encouragement and Beany and my kids did inspired me to make one Ate Fiona..this has been one of our bonding moments hihihi..

      Oh I have been writing for three months already and I hardly noticed it Princess Fiona because I was enjoying my lessons of fun with learning in your school hehehe..I really love colors ever since Ate Fiona even when I was into writing short articles in my school before I used colored ballpens and markers hahaha..my Papa is really good in drawing and I got my interest in colors from him..even in my public speaking class I had always plus grades for my illustrations on every speech that I do..but not as good as Sis Dana..she is really an artist ;)

      Thank you for calling me a poetess Princess Fiona..oh I have still so much to learn..and as what my hon said THANK YOU SO MUCH for being a catalyst..I didn't know I can write poems Princess Fiona..it never entered my mind that I can write poems hihihi..

      Oh yes I have added a link to your site..and the link leads to your posts ate..though I placed the link on your name and your site oh ok I'll put a link too on the Acronet word and insert that it is a prime example from you ;)

      I'll always participate Princess Fiona and it is not just because I want to do a particular challenge but because I have always said I do blogging to inspire people and I build relationships and doing your challenges and supporting the interviews of Sis Marie and Photo Inspiration of Sis Dana was my one way of making every person special because you have been a TRUE Friend to me..Thank you so much Princess Fiona. .Much love too ;)

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    2. Just dropped in to say hello and ohh, this is such a sweet background! You and Beany look so adorable together he he {|:-) ♥

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    3. thank you so much Ate Fi..we are back to being a cute little girl and boy in love..I guess this suits us better because we are like cutie kids in real life..thank you for your visit Ate :)

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  10. Sie....Wow!..that was so creative artistic poem

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    1. Hello Valli..thank you..I just tried doing one..thank you for your visit ;)

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  11. Wow! Very unique, innovative, creative formation and beautiful words! I love it, Sie. I think it takes a lot of time and effort and brain cracking to get it all together. I'm not up to this! :(

    Anyway, I'm so happy to read you and see your beautiful creation. *hugs*

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    1. Hello sis Asni..I really pushed my limits ASni..I didn't know I did it..it is really brain cracking because as what Princess Fiona said I was writing poems for three poems so creating one is really a challenging thing for me..thank you so much Asni *hugs* ;)

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  12. Beautiful words . . . reading all these beautiful poems makes my work look like . . . well . . . mediocre. :(

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    1. Hello Simply me..oh no please don't feel like that..those forms of poetry we are doing are purposely there for us to learn and Princess Fiona's challenge purpose was just to inspire us to be our own..don't be sad ok..thank you for your visit ;)

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  13. Wow.. these are the beautiful lines:) U have done it:)

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    1. Hello Sonia..thank you so much for your visit *hugs* ;)

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  14. The challenge you took up has brought out a wonderful poem. Take care Sie.

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    1. Hello Ms.Nava thank you so much for your visit ;)

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  15. Sie, I've just started a poetry blog (see what the Princess has got me hooked on!) at wordpress. Please visit me when you have the time http://awalkinmyheart.wordpress.com/

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    1. Hello sis ASni..I'll definitely be there ;)

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  16. Wow! Look at you Sie =) Now making your own style and putting your own stamp at it. Beautifully done as well.
    Happy 17th monthsary to you & your hon =) xoxo

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    1. Hello sis Krizzy..thank you so much..salamat sa supporta ;)

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  17. Hi Sie, such a beautifully done poem and artistic too. You do have great talent on this. By the way I also like your background pic here, back to the romantic ancient time-couples are so loving , stroll in the garden on horses…beautiful.... have a nice day

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    1. Hello Wan thank you so much..thank you for being a true friend..have a nice day too ;)

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  18. I love the uniqueness of this poem. You really have excellent ideas in writing it. Bravo! I love the bow, rhymes and perfect images. Superb! :)

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    1. Thank you Balqis..I'm glad you had time reading it and yes it is a rhyming bow with rhymes..but a challenge for myself is can I do it again..thank you for your visit.

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  19. First there was the butterfly form, and then the bow :) What's the next beautiful poem you're going to write? :)
    I'm running out of words to describe how creative you are! :)

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    1. Hello Philo thank you so much for your visit and for being a friend ;)

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  20. ate sie! you've gone a long way with writing poems..
    and now your own form of poetry?? awesome!
    keep up! ^_^

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    1. inspired kasi si ate Clai kay Beany..thank you for your visit..love ka ni ate ;)

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  21. Wow...Sie! You are such a brilliant artist and I am utterly amazed by the unique style of your poetry. The way you came up with this bow like rhyming poetry like is absolutely incredible. And I also love the picture which looks so perfect for your beautiful lines. Keep up the good work!

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    1. Hello Elvirah..I'm glad you liked it..thank you so much for your visit ;)

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  22. Beautiful! The diamond shape poem. yay! It was wonderfully made by sissy.. I haven't visited Beany's yet, got to check it out. Applause for my pretty sissy...Those words sinks in sissy, Hope and Faith :) love the words. Take care my lovely sissy.hugsssssssssssssssssssssssssss

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    1. thank you so much sissy..your ate is inspired so it made me to write poems..thank you so much sissy..love you sissy ;)

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  23. Lovely poem and it looks pretty too.

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  24. I love the way you play with words. You did very well making up your very own style!

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    1. Hello Ms.Kristen..I miss you..I'll visit you your site later..thank you so much for your visit ;)

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  25. Look at this lovely couple on the little boat! They are so cute...........oh my it's you with your angel! Sweet kisses and a sea of blessings and joy!

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    1. weeeeeee..Hello sis Marie..and Beany and I are the cutest couple in this blogger world hihihi..thank you sis Marie ;)

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  26. Sie you know you're wonderful, but I still had to say it. Your words are fabulous.

    P.s. you've been awarded :)

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    1. *shy* thank you so much Confused soul..thank you for always supporting me..*hugs*..thank you for your award ;)

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  27. Sie! wow amazing... simply beautiful thoughts with nice words arrangement and meaningful.. love it!

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    1. thank you so much Rina..I'm glad you liked it ;)

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  28. Sie - this is REALLY stunning! I like the visual of the poem, but the poetry is beautiful....I think it's my favorite one so far! Congratulations on your 17 monthiversary!

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    1. hello Ms.Ann..I miss you so much..I'm back so I'll be visiting your site again..never missing a post *blink*..thank you so much for greeting us Ms.Ann ;)

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  29. On my way to your hubby's site :)
    You've written the poem in such a creative manner :)

    See you when you're back. I'm going to be away for a while too. Take Care till then :)

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    1. Hello Philo..oh thank you so much for visiting my hon's site..I'll be missing you sis..ok take care too and I'll wait for your return ;)

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  30. Hello Sie,
    Oh it's a bow poem. I thought it was DNA. LOL. Sorry, gingineer thinking. It's pretty cool. And your poems usually really show your personality and a lot of emotions.
    It's panagbenga in Baguio already by the way.
    Thinking of doing a post about it but I don't know if I can be in Baguio for it.
    looking for that award by the way.
    *smiles*

    Hi_D

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    1. hala Heidi DNA kaw talaga..yes it is Panagbenga but I can't go home yet..I have so many things to fix here sis..oh yes Heidi I have made a new post for the award you have given thank you so much ;)

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