Wednesday, February 8, 2012

..Captivated Moments**


Sitting  calmly, patiently  waiting 
My tears descending, expecting
Unaware  small drops  of rain
Pours on my window pane
Sincerely swearing
Looking from far
Whispering
Missing
Him
 The
Rain ceased
Soothed silence
Covered  the  place
A heart found it's way
I  felt  your  LOVE  inside
Burning  with  desire  to  stay
Thanking I'm blessed,  remembering
Those wishful vows said, cherished moments
   ♥Sie~

Written for: Quiet Angel Beany

Special Thanks to:
Nonet Poem (hour glass) following with syllable   
counts per line of: 9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9


I'll be waiting for You..If You'll come here..You'll Find Me


There are moments in life when you miss someone so much that you just want to pick them from your dreams and hug them for real ~~by Rania~~


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37 comments:

  1. This is SO beautiful, Sis Sie!! The image is *gorgeous* and so elegant! The appearance of the hourglass is presented lovely! The song enhances all of the elements assembled as one :-)

    My favorite lines: A heart found it's way
    I felt ♥ your love ♥ inside
    Burning with desire to stay


    Much Love {|:) *hugs* x♥x

    P.S. ~ Looks like you're having fun lately, with all of those symbols that people use on Facebook ;)

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    1. Hello Princess Fiona..thank you so much..before I write a poem I search first for a pix and then listen to a song just to get some inspirations from it..weeeeeeeeee..those are also my favorite lines hihihi..much love too Ate Fiona..oh those symbols is it used in facebook? wahhhhhhhhhhhhh..I didn't know Ms.Fiona hahaha..

      I am out of this world because I am not using facebook or even twitter because blogger is already fine with me so I'll have time with my kids and Beany..I was searching the other night how to put pictures on my comment box so I'll be having a little mark every time I'll leave a comment to other sites and it led me to a site with those symbols I tried a smiling symbol and it worked hihihi..thank you again ate Fiona ;)

      We will always be here for you 。◕‿◕。

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    2. Good plan of attack for inspiration he he ;) I left Facebook almost a year ago but before I left, I saw people using similar ones. Don't know if they still do but I'm kinda thinkin' probably he he. Too many social networks not enough time :D ♥

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    3. hehehe..have you read my mail Princess Fiona? you'll laugh hahaha..I go tweet tweet..wrong spelling and obviously I am not using it so I got it spelled wrong hihihi..blogger is fine for me Ate Fiona..a single mom needs more time for her kids..cooking oh I'll go blah blah here..thank you for coming back Ms.Fiona *hugs* 。◕‿◕。

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  2. What a lovely poem about memories and how it touches you- you drew me in with your format and with the words. Really wonderful

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    1. hello Ms.Anjuli..thank you..it is an expression of how I feel..thank you for visiting *hugs* 。◕‿◕。

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  3. Oh my....!! I love this sis!!:) Super! Muaaaaaahhhhhh!!! :) So ano? do you agree now that I told you, mas kapa?? hehehe, iba ka eh...:)) Hmmmmmm, so lovely sis! Thumbs up!!! :)

    What we've learned from our friend and Mentor Princesa Fiona is a wonderful gift that we "can't" find anywhere. So keep it up sis! :)

    Good morning..:)*blink blink* :)

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    1. Aww, that was the sweetest! Touched my heart ~ thanks, Sweet Sagi ♥

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    2. Thank you Ate..mas kapa? oh yes I am lovelier hahaha..sssssshhhhh..

      Yes we all learned poetry through Princess Fiona..as what I have said in my previous post we are her students and I have never written a poem before but with her encouraging words and constant support gave us confidence to try and we did pulled it through thanks to her *blink* ..thank you for your visit ate 。◕‿◕。

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  4. what a wonderful poem. You are really improving sissy, so nice and thoughtful.take care sissy. hugssssssssssss

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    1. thank you sissy weeeeeeee..valentines day so everyone is in love hihihi..thank you for visiting *hugs* 。◕‿◕。

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  5. Ate sie ♥ nakaka matay ang salitang "MISSING SOMEONE" dito!! hehehe

    >> happy hearts day ate sie (mwahness)

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    1. hehehe..yes Missing Someone talaga..Happy hearts day too Ferry salamat 。◕‿◕。

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  6. You have a wonderful way of expressing yourself. Your writing, and you as a person.. I love the feel your blog gives :)
    And the songs you put up, are worth listening to :)

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    1. Hello Philo..thank you and wow thank you for having time to listen to the song I am including on my posts..thank you so much 。◕‿◕。

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  7. ~♥Love is in the air♥~ But I feel that for Sie ♥love is air♥!!!
    Your partner is lucky to have such a dedicated and lovable person by his side. We have never met outside the blogging world and yet I am mesmerized by your charms. You are a lovely blogger with overflowing talents. I look up to you with great respect. ❀(ˆ◡ˆ)❀

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    1. yes love is in the air Sui and this is my one way of expressing my love to him..I am more than blessed for him to make me a part of his life..the best thing he always does is..he always brings out the best in me and supports my own individuality.Thank you for your visit.

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  8. Stunning! Meaningful words, with all the effects you put on the images, wow!!! You've given me a great idea by putting in those symbols in between words to maintain the shape! he he! Thanks! I've learned so much both from Princess Fiona and you.

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    1. Thank you Asni..I really write with my heart so that's the reason why every friend of mine feels my emotions hehehe..oh yes I was really changed on maintaining a perfect shape on my first nonet so I just tried putting some symbols with it..I hope I didn't break any rules..thank you for your visit sis ;)

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  9. Dis hour glass of words is so beautiful.. It is a treat to eyes as well as mind.. Beautiful poetry :)

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    1. Hello Sonia..thank you so much and I'm glad you liked it..thank you for your visit ;0

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  10. The quote you shared Sie is definitely what I have been feeling these past days!
    Love your poem, as always your words echo in my head. Keep your beautiful heart open and may the love of your life finds soon his way to you.
    xxx

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    1. weeeeee..I know you will love this sis Marie..we are on the same boat..missing someone is a special word for us who are in a long distance relationship..oh so sweet "may the love of your life finds soon his way to you"..weeeeeeeee..you really know sis how to let my heart go beat beat beat hehehe..thank you so much sis 。◕‿◕。

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    2. And you really know how to make my heart feels beauty! xxxxxxxx

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    3. hihihi because we are both pretty..see it rhymed with beauty hahaha..oh sis my mind is full of rhymes and you'll see tomorrow why hihihi ;)

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  11. awwww! *eyes in tears*
    I love the poem! and the picture too! =)
    I had some dream about you and Beanizer, hahaha, strange , I think you guys were telling me to play some game online LOL! It was a comment or something. =P

    Dreams can come true...just believe.
    xxx

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    1. awwwwwww..you felt how I am missing him hehehe..thank you sis..oh had a dream..me and my hon telling you to play a game hahaha..what game sis maybe angry birds hihihi..thank you for filling my site with your happy comments sis..

      Yes dreams do come true and I am more than willing to wait just to be with him and have a new family with Beany and our kids 。◕‿◕。

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  12. You did it again, Sie! The image and poem complement each other. Oh how sweet! Your heart speaks again. I can hear it beating romantically. ;)

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    1. Thank you Balqis..Yes so sweet because he is sweet too..he deserves everything that I am doing..it is my own little way of saying how much I cherish every moment with him..oh my heart is always beating romantically..thank you for your visit.

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  13. hi sie, another beautiful poetry captivating many hearts..
    i also like the pic of the lady with the antique lamp..
    so soft so demure. have a nice day

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    1. Hello Wan..thank you so much..weeeeee..I am always into love topics you know that hihihi..that's me hehehe..have a nice day too Wan..thank you for your visit 。◕‿◕。

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  14. i am short of words *tears in eyes*
    God bless you both :)

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    1. Hello Ordinary girl..weeeeeee you're here..God bless you too and thank you so much for your visit ;)

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  15. Nicely done poem taking us down in sorry and back up to hope. Very good.

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    1. Hello Ms.Kristen..I'm glad you liked it and I was about to tell you I tried your beans recipe the one with sesame oil and honey and yes it is so yummy and healthy and just go munching loving every bite..thank you Ms.Kristen ;)

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  16. beautiful...the concept communicated so profusely yet not compromising on the structure of the poem:)

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    1. Hello A Grain of sand..oh my you are a friend of Ms.Fiona..I am soooooooo honored for your visit mam..thank you so much for reading it and having time to visit my site ;)

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