Saturday, January 14, 2012

* My first Haiku poem~


Hearts bloom by the sea

so does with her soul sinking

deeply into thee 

~Sie~

 

Every man is afraid of something. That's how you know he's in love with you; when he is afraid of losing you.



I cannot live out on my own
And just forget the love you've always shown
And accept the fate of my condition
Please don't ever go
For I cannot live my life alone

Say you'll never go away

This is my first attempt to write a haiku poem..I was inspired to try and write one..you can check more haiku poems on my friends site.

Queen of Haiku poems Balqis @Part and Parcel of Life ~ and  

Queen of Poems and our Mentor Princess Fiona @ The Princess Passions..  

Thank you so much for being our Inspiration..I hope you enjoyed it




 
 



47 comments:

  1. you make haiku too?? it's the same i do when i have flu..i sneeze..haiku! *blink blink*
    i know that song!
    say you'll never goooooo
    say you'll never go out my waaaaaaaayyyy
    say you'll never goooooooo
    for we can still go on and make it through...
    just say you'll never go.
    say you'll never go awaaaaaayyyy...

    see? hmmmm...don't i deserve a kisssssssshh??
    *wiggle wiggle*

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    1. hahaha..ok it rhymed haiku..flu always goes with a hatchu hahaha..say you'll never go away..stay with me forever ok..you're here inside my heart..and it will remain here forever

      kishhhh..hehehe..mwah mwah mwah

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  2. i wonder how you made your words dance
    hmmmmm....

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    1. aha aha aha..dance like this..*wiggle wiggle*

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    2. *wiggle wiggle*
      more more!
      mmmmmmmmmmuuuuuuuuuuuwwwwwaaaaaaaahhhhhh

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    3. hahaha..*mwah mwah mwah mwah tsup tsups*♥♥♥

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  3. Hi sie, this is a very beautiful haiku, love it, congrats at your first try, you already passed A level (advance/

    sie, for me i will want it to be "his soul sinking into me" and" never able to get out- drowned forever"...ha ha now, how do i haiku that.. have a nice day

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    1. hahaha..hello Wan.."his soul sinking into me"..same here..it would be much lovelier when both of them are sinking beautifully..but not drowned oh my..but ok my hon is best doing a cpr hehehe..thank you for your visit Wan..ayayay I forgot..you have a new post too..I was rushing doing my haiku so I haven't visited you yet..ok going there now..*knock knock~Wan..yuhoo..anybody home?*

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  4. OMG! The minute I stepped in here, I was surprised seeing the highest title you bestowed me. Thank you so much, Sie. :) I;m still in the learning process though. :)

    You're talented! Your first Haiku is awesome! Loved it! As always, you mentioned love. Looking forward for more Haikus. :)

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    1. Hello queen Balqis..learning? ehe ehe so where does that leave me uha uha..hehehe..honestly you have mastered writing it Balqis..every haiku you have written gives a challenge for your readers to dig deep for it's meanings and I love pondering on it..thank you and oh nooooo..more haikus? oh I'd rather do another fibonacci ehe ehe..oh ok *love*..do I have any other topic in mind? hahaha *blink*

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  5. I loved the song you have posted :) It's lovely..
    You managed to bring out so many emotions through such little words. Don't we all long to have someone by our side who will never leave? :)
    Your writing is lovely :)

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    1. oh the love poet is here..hello Philo *waving hand*
      I love the song too Philo..it is my first time to squeeze my thoughts using short words..I hope I did it right..yes Philo we all long to have someone by our side..to be with forever..someone who will hold our hand..loving us till our last breath..oh like how your story goes..it always starts with a spark then love blooms unexpectedly..thank you for reading and listening to the video Philo..I really appreciate it ;)

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  6. Love your Haiku. So romantic. You are so gifted, Sie. Don't stop writing all these poems.

    For me, I find it difficult with the restriction of 5,7,5 word count. My brain just goes blank. :(

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    1. Hello Asni..I also had my mind blank a lot of times..I was always amazed reading the haikus of Balqis and when I saw Sagittarian and now Princess Fiona writing it..I said ok why don't I try writing even just one..I have been a fan of Balqis for a year now but I never dared writing one..

      It is my first attempt Asni and honestly it was hard for me counting those syllables wahhhhhhhh..just try it sis Asni..it is a challenge for us *wink*

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  7. Such amazing words you have stated here Sie. Thumbs up for the haiku poem. Take care Sie.

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    1. Thank you Ms.Nava..take care always Ms.Nava and have a lovely day *hugs* ;)

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  8. Such a heartfelt haiku. I love it... I'm sure he does too ;)

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    1. hehehe..weeeeeeee..hello Peps..I can see you smiling..missing someone???..yes I'm sure he does too..stay in love Peps *wink*thank you for your visit ;)

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  9. Wow!! The Princess of Fibo, now in Haiku!! This is so great!! I love it so much my dear sis!! :) Ummmm... i love the song too..:) How sweet it is to be in love...:) Keep it up!!:) Our Queen of Haiku Balqis and Queen of Fibonacci Princesa Fiona would be so proud of you!!:) Congrats sis!!:) Muaaaaaaaaahhhh:)

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    1. hmp hmp..ate Rosalinda your better..your haiku rhymes eh..light then change the first letter it becomes tight..oha oha..I couldn't do that hehehe..thank you ate *hugs*

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  10. Hey Sie...=) <3

    SO touching ! *cries*
    I love it. ! *heart cries* I wish to have a love one day ^.^ lol, I'll just keep waiting =)... I hope things go well with you! *hug* <3 Stay happy dear sis ! =D
    Take care
    xxx

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    1. sis Dana..ok you cried on my haiku or you cried laughing on my comments with my hon Beany *blink blink*

      You will have your pious man someday sis Dana..and I will be the first one to smile knowing you have found the right man..your still young sis..ok that explains it..I'm older so love has finally found me..fine duh hahaha..thank you sis Dana for being here *hugs hugs*

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    2. Haha, yeah you are right. =P You're like my big sister ^.^ yay
      *hugs*

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    3. hehehe..it is an honor to be called your like my big sister..ayayay..ok you made it more obvious that I am older hmp hmp..but yeah I have two kids so it is obvious hahaha..it's ok you are pretty so that means I am too hahaha..corny hmp..thank you sis Dana *hugs hugs*

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    4. sis Dana..kindly watch the video..they are one of the best band here in our country when I was in 3rd year highschool..ok fine and how old are you then? you still cry uha uha uha..hahaha ;)

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  11. Love your haiku, I think I am right to say you have many talents my dear friend. He knows you are a precious gift, he will never let you go..............wishing you so much happiness!!!!!!! And love.
    Hope you will write more Haiku soon. xxxxxxxxxxxxx

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    1. Hello sis Marie *hugs hugs hugs*
      I hope so sis Marie..he will never let me go..or else I'll sink deeply into sea wahhhhhhh..joke *blink*

      Thank you so much sis Marie for always being there on every chapter of my life *wink*..more Haiku??? oh I'm not good in counting syllables sis hehehe ;)

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  12. Awww, that's wonderful. Can't believe it's your first try. You're clever Sie, I wouldn't even know where to begin.
    And I love that song. =)

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    1. hello Kristeta *hugs hugs*..it is my first try Kristeta..compared to fibonacci and cinquain..this form of poetry is harder for me because I have to write my thoughts using only 3 lines and with it comes counting syllables wahhhhhh..a 5,7,5 pattern..huhuhu..Yes I love the song too..and songs from Neo Colours always touched my heart..*thank you for your visit*

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  13. It's lovely, Ms. Sie ~ especially the first line! I think part of the beauty of Japanese haiku lies in the fact that it normally doesn't rhyme but you made it work nicely :-) We're all still learning *winkie* The first animated rose graphic is stunning! Have a beautiful day! ♥

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    1. Hello Princess Fiona..honestly Lady Fiona I changed the first line hehehe..the first time I wrote it..Heart blooms faithfully..but when I went to your site and Balqis site I learned that haiku poems where purposely written to express one's emotions through nature so I included a word that will sound like my last word thee..so I thought of the word sea..thank you for your visit Princess Fiona and have a beautiful day too ;)

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  14. Yes, I did enjoy it!
    Lovely sentiments!
    Thank you!

    Have a wonderful weekend!

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    1. Hello Ms.Margie..thank you for your visit and have a wonderful weekend too ;)

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  15. Hi Sie!!
    Lovely Haiku and it didn't seem like your first one.. ;) I loved it!
    Even your blog was not on my reading list...I seriously think there's some problem with blogger!!!
    Keep Smiling!!
    xoxox

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    1. Hello Hisila..it is my first try and I have second thoughts of doing it again ahay..oh no..maybe blogger is sooooooo slow updating our dashboards..your post appeared on my dashboard 5 hours ago..when I visited your site it was published on the 13th wahhhhhhhhh..keep smiling too Hisila ;)

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    1. Hello Confused Soul thank you for visiting ;)

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  17. The poem is excellent Ms.Sie but I don't know what is ment by Haiku. Ms.sie I seriously think you should pursue your career on literature , you are really very good writer . If I were a publisher I would definitely publish your life's journey! Don't leave your talent Ms.sie *hugs*!!!!

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    1. Haiku is a Japanese form of poetry sis..it is written usually using 3 lines with 5,7,5 count of syllables and relates on aspects of nature. It is my first time and I am still learning.I was inspired by Princess Fiona..her site is full of inspirational poems sis Sudhi.Yes I won't stop writing poems sis..it is one of my ways of expressing my true emotions..Love you Sudhi and thank you so much for always being here..for your friendship with Beany and me.

      We are so grateful to have a friend like you..it is more than a year now and you are still here..being with me with every step of my journey..*Thank You*

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    2. I should thankyou for being such a good friend...!!!! *cheers*

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    3. *hugs hugs hugs*..thank you so much Sudhi ;)

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  18. haiku haiku *bowing head* sissy, you are getting good with these kind of poems.weeeeeeeeeeee your creativity is starting to bloom now. How I wish I can be good as you. weeeeeeeeeee, I had fun reading the comments here. *mwaaah* *hugsssssssssssssssssssssssssssss** miss you sissy :) love-love-love!

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    1. hasus..you are really my sissy hehehe..mwahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..yes sissy love love love *hugs hugs* ;)

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  19. wow... lovely haiku with apt picture...
    loved it buddy...

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    1. hello Kalai..I'm glad to see you here..thank you ;)

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