Warrior
Heroic, tough, vigorous
Fighting, defending, abiding
Experienced and trained for battle
Conqueror
It is my first attempt to do a Cinquain poem. Another challenge after the fibonacci challenge from Princess Fiona @ The Princess Passions. This is my little contribution to your challenge Princess I hope I pass your test. This Cinquain poem is a short introduction to my next fibonacci hehehe..it is already saved on my drafts weeeee..*blushing* I don't know but this is harder for me than writing a fibonacci because it is composed of shorter words. I am always used to writing long ones huhuhu..*blink blink*
Rules: Provided by Princess Fiona~
Line 1: One noun (a person, place or thing) This will be the subject of your Cinquain
Line 2: Three adjectives which describe the noun of line one.
Line 3: Three descriptive gerunds, which are verbs (action words) + ing.
Line 4: One complete sentence that relates to your subject.
Line 5: One noun which is a synonym of the first noun in line one.
*wiggle*
ReplyDeleteis that you?? you're a warrior too? and vewy bwave like me???--well, that only means one thing,,,,you should hug me then.. hmmmmmmmmmmmm...
@Beany-weeeee..hon your the first one to comment..hahaha..I just received your text and you said you will already work ehehehe..yes I am brave too like you..I should be because you are the "web knight"..ok not those spider thing..wahhhh..the internet web word ok..*hugs* hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ;)
ReplyDelete*wide grin*
ReplyDeletei'm the first coz i'm vewy bwave!
and..and..i want to start my day with a smile here *pointing here*..so i read your warrior post :)
i'll be back soon! tsup tsup!
@Beany-weeeee..I know your sooooo brave..because you chose to have a relationship with me wahhhhhhhh..
ReplyDeleteyou made me smile..as always..I'll be waiting..tsup tsups ;0
Great subject and Cinquain! Love it and also the animations! Looking forward to your next post since it relates to this one :)
ReplyDeleteIt's easier for me to write these than the Fibs, so I guess we're opposite that way he he! I'm not an expert on any of these poetic forms ~ they are new to me also so I don't have the expertise to 'grade' them. If I could I'd give you an A+ he he he ;) Thanks for your participation! You write wonderfully! Much Love :) x0x
P.S. ~ I'm being entertained by you and Beany ha ha ha!
@Princess Fiona-weeeeeeee..hello princess your here..thank you so much for spending time to visit me though I know you have numerous visitors on your site hehehe..
ReplyDeleteYes Princess I have a Fibonacci related to my Cinquain and I have written it before doing your challenge though I have to publish this first..I don't want to be late in submitting my papers to our Mentor eheehehe..
I am used to explaining myself in longer forms of writing Princess Fiona ahahaha..
hahaha..my hon and I are just starting our day with laughter and lots of smiles..also in real life princess we just can't stop laughing even on simple things..don't worry princess we are still normal hehehe..*hugs hugs* ;)
Hi Sie! Wonderful Cinquain and I loved it! I'll try to write one too but don't know whether it'll be good one or not...but I'll surely try to write one....Take Care! Keep Smiling! :)
ReplyDeleteHi Sie! Wonderful cinquain and a great first attempt...hats off to you and I'll try to write one too. Hope it'll be good enough!....Take care and Keep Smiling!
ReplyDelete@Hisila-hello Hisila..I know you can do it..you have written a haiku which I won't even dare to do one..Balqis who is an expert on Haiku's did it too so easily..I'll be waiting for your Cinquain..kindly check out Madam Princess Fiona's site for more info. hehehe..thank you for your visit *hugs* ;)
ReplyDeleteYou penned it so well!A great Cinquain.
ReplyDeleteOoppss! I'm not an expert in Haiku. I write cos I can't think of longer sentences! :p
@Balqis-thank you Balqis..for me you are an expert in haiku..I couldn't even write one huhuhu..I am not good in counting syllables wahahaha..thank you for your visit ;)
ReplyDeleteWow! Great sis! :) You really deserve to be called a second princess! :) From Fibo and now at Cinquain, you've done excellent my dear sister.:) So proud of your talent! It's a bow wow! :) Keep it up sis..:) Good morning! :)
ReplyDeletehi sie, fantastic post, you are very innovative.like your style always ..ahem gimme a hug gor that ha ha have a nicfe day
ReplyDeleteHello, Sie.
ReplyDeleteI've never heard of cinquain (did I spell that right? *Goes back up to check* Yup I did. *goes back down*) poems before...
Thanks for sharing this. I think you did a pretty good job... And I really like the first animated pic... Have a nice day..
*smiles*
Hi_D
@Sagittarian-I was waiting for your post too ateh..second princess naaaaahhhh..Princess Fiona holds the crown I'm just a follower hehehe..it is a short summary for my next post..a fibonacci ateh..thank you for your visit..Good morning hasus..you woke up late hahaha ;)
ReplyDelete@cooking varieties-hello Wan..I hope your ok now..*hugs hmmmmmmmmmm*..hang in there ok have a nice day too ;)
ReplyDelete@White witch-hello Heidi..it is also my first time to hear it..it is another form of poetry introduced to us by Princess Fiona..you write poems too ah..why don't you do one though I know your busy finding for a job now..good luck and God bless you Heidi ;)..thank you for your visit ;)
ReplyDeletetaran!
ReplyDeletei'm here again! *blink blink*
what do we have for lunch date?
*holding tummy*
wait, Lady Fiona said we're entertainers? did she mean, we should..*wiggle wiggle*??
Nice one ate sie!!!
ReplyDeleteFierce ung picture!! ^_^
ate Sie Cinquian is not my friend!!! hehehe
ReplyDelete>> grabe I've tried to do this pero wala eh!! hindi talga!! walang rhyme... hindi lang siguro talaga ako poetic....
>> mwahness
Wow! a lovely Cinquain. Hard to believe its your first attempt. I am inspired to write my own. Thank you for sharing :-)
ReplyDeleteI'd say you passed with flying colors! This is another great challenge! Always nice to see what you're writing, Sie!
ReplyDeleteYour poems are inspiring and warm.Love it.
ReplyDeletehehehe..have you seen my Cin at Lady Fiona's corner? look look!..*pulling hand*
ReplyDelete*wiggle wiggle*
@Beany-taran I cooked spaghetti but if you come here for dinner I'll cook ok taran select from my menu..bicol express, adobo, ginataang shrimps, chicken curry bla bla..name it ahahaha..and tons of chocos weeeeee..bring me pasalubong..napoleones ok yummy yummy ;0
ReplyDeletees Ms.Fiona called us entertainers..wiggle wiggle..shake shake..oh I know Princess would love this..come on let's twist again or running man or cha cha boogie ehe ehe ;)
@Clai-hello Clai..ah eh trial lang sis..don't you remember that pix..that's me wahhhhhhhh dreaming hahaha..thank you for your visit sis ;)
ReplyDeleteVery good, Sie. I love it. You are a born poet! Just like Princess Fiona.
ReplyDelete@Ferryjhoi-hhahaha..Ferry talaga..try lang ni ateh..stay in-love and happy first wedding anniversary ulit *hugs*..thank you for your visit ;)
ReplyDelete@Zach-thank you
ReplyDelete@Ann-hello Ms.Ann *hugs*..thank you so much for your support..I really appreciate your visit always Ms.Ann ;0
ReplyDelete@Izdiher-weeeeee..hello sis your here..so just finished teaching your cute little ones ;)..thank you sis for visiting and keep smiling..have a nice day *hugs*;)
ReplyDelete@Beany-ha? eheeeeeeeeee..ok running ;)
ReplyDelete@Inspiring always-hello Asni..awwwwww..*shy*..thank you for your visit ;0
ReplyDelete@Beany-weeeeeeeee..you have done it..as always choco boy strikes again hehehe ;0..you have written it so fast..ok I'll think another topic hehehe ;)
ReplyDeleteOoh I liked this :D I love how you ended it with Conqueror it ended it off with a *BAM* :D
ReplyDeleteI'm going to try this sometime :P it looks like fun.
I've also been doing a little writing lately. I'd love you forever if you could check it out and let me know what you think :P (It's the one I mentioned yesterday that made me cry) *I've created a monster* :P
@Taytay-hello Tay..thank you..yes I'll definitely visit you now..ok running hehehe ;)
ReplyDeleteAmong all you have shared that one word which got to me was the warrior. Don't we are all warriors at times, defending and protection those close to our heart. Lovely sharing and great work Sie, take care.
ReplyDeleteWell done Sie :)
ReplyDelete@Nava k.-hello Ms. Nava..yes each one of us has a warrior spirit inside us waiting to be unleashed when needed hehehe..thank you for your visit Ms.Nava ;)
ReplyDelete@Riya-Hello Riya..thank you ;)
ReplyDelete*sniff sniff*
ReplyDeletehmp! that princess tongue out at me! she even accuse me of baby talking! hmp! hmp! i'm a big guy alwedy,,righttttt?? *blink blink*
Oh I like that. Very nice. Wish you a happy 2012.
ReplyDelete@Beany-Princess Fiona is just joking..but wahhhh I can't imagine her doing that oh no..don't worry you will always be my baby Beany honey hehehe..*hugs*
ReplyDelete@Suzy-hello Ms.Suzy..thank you for your visit and Happy 2012 too God bless you ;)
ReplyDeleteThis is a good one! I think I wanna join. If I have time to think. That's hard stuff hehehe.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations Sie! I like your poem and the animations!
Thumbs up!
Hey Sie!!
ReplyDeleteWoow! MashaAllah...I love this!! Go warrior! =) Lovely work ^.^
Keep it up, hope things are fine with you sis
take care
xxx
@Divina Joy-weeeeeee..hello sis..and you have been soooooo busy these days ..I'm so glad you visited me sis..Happy new year hehehe *hugs* ;)
ReplyDelete@Dana Ml-hello sis Dana *hugs another hug*..hehehe I was waiting for you here because I know you love warriors though ok fine it is not a guy..your pious special someone weeeeee..it is an introduction to my next Fibonacci poem sis hehehe..take care always sis ;) ;0
ReplyDeleteYou said it Sie, I love warriors! hahaha. There's no way I'm going to miss out in a warrior post! =D hehe! =P If you find me a warrior just call me =P
ReplyDeleteI love all your posts sis <3 Keep it up
I just checked her blog, it's very creative, hehe ^.^ Take care too sie xxx
*HUG*
Nice one :)
ReplyDeletePowerful piece :)
ReplyDelete@Dana ML-hahaha..I have my own warrior sis Dana..but he has no brothers oh ok cousins maybe hehehe..thank you sis *hugs hugs* ;)
ReplyDelete@Shreya-thank you Shreya ;)
ReplyDelete@Philo-thank you Philo..*hugs* ;)
ReplyDeletewow... u have written it so audaciously...
ReplyDeleteloved it....
hello Kalai..hehehe..nice words for a warrior I should say..and why didn't I think of that word audaciously..fits a warrior perfectly..thank you kalai ;)
ReplyDeleteCinquains are not easy at all- you have done a termendous job on this!!
ReplyDeletehello Ms.Anjuli thank you so much for your visit..welcome to my site..thank you..yes it is a bit hard and it was a challenge on finding the right synonym on the last line ;)
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