Monday, January 30, 2012

..Persistent *

Praying 
Forbearingly
Whispering calmly
Hidden fears crying
Her buried sufferings still unheard
Silence and flooded tears where her only armour
Enticement of giving up is strong and her soul can't be awakened anymore
She was battered, bruised, hated and harassed that made her weak 
with bitter weeds of strife and misbeliefs of agonizing defeat
Yet her enduring faith won't fail though forced down by her ruthless foes
She still stands despite her tormenting earthly woes
Heavy troubles made her whole
Unveiling  purest soul
The beauty
Inside
Her
 ~Sie~

Special Thanks to: Princess Fiona
@ The Princess and Passions
a fibonacci poem following 
with word counts per line of: 
1,1,2,3,5,8,13,21,13,8,5,3,2,1,1
“The most beautiful people I've known are those who have known trials, have known struggles, have known loss, and have found their way out of the depths.”
― Elisabeth Kübler-Ross


“And once the storm is over, you won’t remember how you made it through, how you managed to survive. You won’t even be sure, whether the storm is really over. But one thing is certain. When you come out of the storm, you won’t be the same person who walked in. That’s what this storm’s all about.”
― Haruki Murakami


Things will work out fine
If you can find the courage
To look past the light
To see the break of dawn

I just wanna breathe again
Learn to face the joy and pain
Discover how to laugh a little
Cry a little, live a little more

I just wanna face the day
Forget about the walls of yesterday
Maybe if I hope a little
Try a little more
I’ll breathe again

image source: yahoo search and
photobucket.com


42 comments:

  1. Very well sis! That's why I know you are beautiful. You have a way of conquering trials in your life that makes you stronger and inspires other people.
    I pray for your continued happiness, sis. big hugs xoxo

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    1. Hello sis Krizzy..sometimes we really need to be strong because we don't have any choice but to hold on..we are all beautiful because surviving made us to be one..thank you sis and God bless you and your family *hugs* ;)

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  2. Another nicely penned Fibonacci, Sis Sie :-) I LOVE this image ~ I have it in my files ... the only difference between the two is that this one has the *bling*! The quotations are *awesome*! I am going to return and save these in my files. Thanks for sharing and also for presenting this lovely song!

    Much Love from Ate Fiona ;) x0x

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    1. Hello ate Fiona..thank you for always inspiring me to write one..I love the image too and I am always into images with a bling..I couldn't help myself to appreciate images with glitter graphics hehehe..those quotes have always inspired me Prinecess Fiona..oh the song..yes it is another local artist from our country..thank you for your visit ate *hugs* ;)

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  3. You are a true warrior. Rising from the ashes and nothing can keep you down. Sie, may you always stay strong and be an inspiration to others! *hugs*

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    1. Hello Asni..thank you..your words reminded me of my favorite author..Beauty for Ashes by Joyce Meyer..let us all be an inspiration to others..thank you for your visit ;)

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  4. *blink blink*

    ich tat youuuu?? vewy pretty and..hmmmmm...*reaching jacket* here! wear this! hmp! you're over-exposed! hmp! you should not let them seee that *pointing*

    maybe some of my Fibs are here that's why I can't see them in my site..hmmmmmmm....

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    1. that's not me hon..I'm not that pretty..heheeeee..don't worry I won't wear like that ok *wink*..I know your password remember so I copied your Fib poems from your site hehehe..I hope you don't mind sharing it with me hihihi ;)

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  5. Lovely as ever sis..:) Keep sharing! :) Great thoughts too,:) God bless sis..:)

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    1. Thank you for your visit ate..God bless you too ;)

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  6. These are the beautiful lines.. And the angel picture is just so adorable. I wish I cud meet a real angel someday:) U have got a fabulous blog here.. Keep Writing:)

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    1. Hello Sonia..welcome to my site..I also wish to meet a real angel someday..and sometimes there are angels in our midst..these are people who are God sent to help us in our journey..thank you so much Sonia for leaving a comment..I have visited your site and followed you too ;)

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  7. This word sentence which have shared:

    “The most beautiful people I've known are those who have known trials, have known struggles, have known loss, and have found their way out of the depths.”
    ― Elisabeth Kübler-Ross::::::

    absolutely true and I have been one of them and you will also find your way and come up soon. Sorry that I don't feel comfortable sharing so in depth my live journey in which I went through trails and tabulations.

    If I can survive, anyone out can. Take care Sie and hope you feeling better now.

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    1. Hello Ms. Nava *hugs*..I always smile when I see you here Ms.Nava..thank you for always leaving me with encouraging and kind words..yes I am starting to climb up from the depths that I had been Ms.Nava..I am ok now..I am so happy but I think I have to rebuild myself still..there are certain changes that I have to do..rediscover my inner strength again *hugs*..thank you again ;)

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  8. Heart touching! Lots of beauty in it but on top of all is the beauty of your courage, will and strength in facing the trials and tribulations. Stay strong! :)

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    1. Hello Balqis..this is poem is not only written only for me but to be an inspiration to all of us to hold on and be strong on whatever trials that may still come..thank you for visiting sis *hugs hugs* ;)

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  9. A*w*e*s*o*m*e
    Such a courageous expression, well-executed poetry form and and incredibly heart warming recollection. I simply ♥love♥ it.

    Fight on brave lady!

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    1. Hello Sui..thank you so much and I'm glad you liked it..yes fighting on every step of my journey..little steps but at least I'm getting there..thank you for your visit Sui ;)

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  10. sissy, I hope you are doing fine. I can feel you are kind of sad. But why? hehe.muaaaah! Don't be super sad, dadami ang wrinkles. hehe. sissy, FIGHTING!! *hugsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss*

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    1. I am happy sissy..these poems are the poems I have written before..remember my previous post I am leaving hehehe..I just published it now sissy..don't worry I am still like you pretty oh look and I have no wrinkles yet because I am using olay wahhhhhhahaha..nagcommercial si ate *blink*..*hugs hugs*..thank you sissy ;)

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  11. Hey Sie,
    Wonderful...yeah we all go through struggles. And we learn a lot through them...I love the way you put it all together! ^.^

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    1. Hello sis Dana..yes we all go through struggles though we have them in different ways all of it is for a purpose of learning and maturity..thank you sis Dana *hugs* ;)

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  12. You have painted you so well Sie. I admire your courage and faith in life. The quotations are great, when I look back I don't understand how I went through the storm, what kept me going but after all what counts is standing up again and continuing the road.
    Stay as pure and as beautiful as you are Sie. Be blessed with more joy and may the hardships cease so you live your life with ease and love.
    Hugs to you my dear. xxx

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    1. Hello sis Marie *hugs hugs*..thank you sis..your right sis standing up again and moving on after every storm we have been through..it won't matter much on how many times we have failed and on how many times we have have been wounded and broken..the most important thing is we survived and we are moving on again..thank you for your friendship sis *hugs hugs* ;)

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  13. OMG this is so well- written. I could feel the pain. The emotion. A rush. Wow Sie. I always look forward to your writing :)

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    1. Hello confused soul..weeeeeee..a compliment from an excellent writer like you made me smile..hihihi..thank you confused soul..I wrote this poem two weeks ago when I also wrote to everyone here that I was leaving..but I just published it now..you have felt the pain and sadness I have felt when I wrote it..thank you so much *hugs* ;)

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  14. Oh wonderful. I like how you show the waiting and the going through troubles brings out the beauty from inside. It is never wasted.

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    1. weeeee..Hello Ms.Anjuli *hugs*..you're here..yes Ms.Anjuli fighting and going through troubles is never easy but it is never wasted..sometimes we need to go through these challenges in our lives for us to be stronger and oftentimes we need to be broken so we can find the real person inside us ;)

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  15. What a lovely poem - a beautiful way to stand strong in the face of adversity.

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    1. Hello Ms.Ann..thank you..*hugs hugs* ;)

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  16. I love this poem Sie! hugs and cheers!

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    1. Hello Rina..thank you for your visit *hugs* ;)

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  17. played the video
    started reading the poem
    T_T...

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    1. hehehe..thank you for listening and reading Clai ;)

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  18. Awww...The poem is so beautiful....I loved it!
    You write so well...I loved reading it...The emotions are captured so nicely!
    Keep Smiling :)
    Loads Of Love xoxox

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    1. Hello Hisila..weeeee you're here..thank you so much Hisila..I'm glad you liked it..Keep smiling too and have a nice day *hugs* ;)

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  19. hi sie,a beautiful and meaningful piece of poem. i also like that quote
    " And once the storm is over, you won’t remember how you made it through, how you managed to survive."
    well, somehow we all survived through all calamities and come out wiser and more tolerant in life. sie, have a nice day.

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    1. Hello Wan..thank you and have a nice day too *hugs* ;)

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  20. I can’t tell you how much it helped me understand more the emotional feelings that I have I went through a different kind of abuse as a young woman. Going through all the pshy. Classes I took and the 2 years of therapy it never answered the “whys” as well as this book did. Helped me understand the shame feelings that I was dealing with and not being so hard on myself and how to take the “wall” down… I can’t always be on defense- just to make sure no one will do that again… everyone is going to hurt you in some way or another as I will do that as well.

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    1. Hello Danmark..I have been through a lot..I have been physically abused too and my kids from my ex husband but God did made me stronger to fight back and stand again for them..thank you for your visit.

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