Music dances with the beat of our hearts
Yearning for the immortal notes of love
Evolving through this melody of twists and sway
You and I have found harmony to thrive
Endless steps and fearless swings made us stay
Seeing through my eyes, our dance of love on it's lifetime rhythm
“Dance as though no one is watching you. Love as though you have never been hurt before. Sing as though no one can hear you. Live as though heaven is on earth.”
~♥Sie♥~
**The 'double' part comes into play
when the first letter of each line contains
the last letters with the same word..it can be
with same form or backwards.**
..this my first try so it is short uhuhu..
with same form or backwards.**
..this my first try so it is short uhuhu..
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*looking carefully around*
ReplyDeletehahaha..yes hon your first hehehe ;)
DeleteFatty pot you cant dance with that pot belly beside beautiful Ms.sie :P
DeleteHello Sudhi..don't worry your friend has been on a diet..he is a hunk now hehehe..8 pack abs..oh that's too much hahaha..
Deletethat is you and me dance dance??? *blink blink* vewy good acrostic..hmmmmm..you didn't teach me though. hmp!
ReplyDeletelook oh! i am gwapo and you are ganda..tantaran taran taran taran..*holding hand, dancing*
btw, i didn't wear diapy when i dance there, did i? i can play in that piano, what me to serenade youuuu??
you should look in my eyes when i we dance *blink blink*
yes hehehe..both of us dancing..it is double acrostic hehehe..yes you will always be handsome in my eyes and not for the eyes of other women hehehe..diapy??? grrrrrr..you are a man now you're no longer a baby..serenade me? what song hon? *blink blink*
Deletehon,,look at my pants oh! it's soooo tight and high! should i wear those pants every time we dance???
Deletei will sing ahmmmmmmm *thinking, close eyes*..do you know the song OUT OF MY LEAGUE? ..the line--'coz she's all that i see and she's all that i need and i'm out of my league once again..tan tan tan tan..*wiggle wiggle*
hahaha..hon you don't need to wear those tight pants though it won't look nice if you will be wearing a diapy while I am wearing a gown..wahhhhhhhhhh..I don't want to wear diapy either hmp hmp..our kids would be shocked and they will be the ones throwing diapy at us *wink*..
Deleteahay hon I don't know the song but I'll listen to it later ok..*blink blink*
come here of..share tayo headset..kanta han kita maya pag-uwi ko..hihihi..
Deleteok, i won't wear diapy then, hmmmmm...i got the most comments in here! yey! *jumping* huh! i'm the first the first! hmp!
weeeeeeeeee..you'll sing to me that song yehey..mwah mwah mwah..
Deleteyes you're first hon hahaha..they are still sleeping ssssshhhhhh..they might hear you hehehe..let's dance and sing and wiggle and twist and sway all day..ok that's so tiring..here let's sit down and just munch chocos *blink*
hehe :) parang matagal kana nagawa ng poem Ate sie ahh!! I can still recall the double acrostic poem.. tinuro to ng professor ko back when I was in college eh!! hihi
ReplyDeletepero until now, mukhang hindi ko talaga kaya!! hihi
I tried, pero parang corny and wala talaga sa rhyme!!!
This is my first try to do a double acrostic poem Ferry that's why it is short..try lang si ate hihihi ..thank you for visiting again *hugs* ;)
DeleteHey Sie
ReplyDeletewell written!! so harmonizing (if that makes any sense) hahaha =) *HUGS*
hehehe..thank you sis Dana *hugs* ;)
DeleteSo well written! You're now very good in poems. :)
ReplyDeleteLove is always in the eyes of the beholder.
Loved it! :)
*shy* it is my first try sis..I'm still learning and trying very hard *wink*..thank you for reading and for liking it *blink*
DeleteHello Sie!
ReplyDeleteI read your comment on Sagittarian's blog and I had to come and see for myself. You have done a remarkable job with this double acrostic. The words flow naturally giving off a very sentimental touch to the poem. I love it. ♥♥♥
Yours is a very lovely blog. Have a good day! :)
Hello Sui..oh my your here..ate Rosalinda's mentor is here..I had edited it many times hehehe..thank you so much for your instructions and for Ms.Fiona bringing it out..I am still on my way on discovering different kinds of poetry and Princess Fiona have always inspired me to write..the words flow naturally because I usually write based on my emotions. Thank you Sui and I'll be visiting your site too ;)
DeleteOoh, this is too hard for me! :( Think I'll just stick to the cinquains and fib. But you did it so beautifully, Sie!
ReplyDeleteHappy dancing! Wishing you much happiness and much, much love.
Hello sis Asni..ahay I have edited it many times because I am use to explaining myself in verses heeeee..thank you for your visit *hugs* ;)
DeleteGlad you're back :) Your words really just flow.. :)
ReplyDeleteI have something for you on my blog :)
Hello Philo..thank you oh ok I'll go there now..thank you in advance ;)
DeleteVery nice Sie, you have the talent and the soul of a poet! Your love is blessed to have you, may you dance forever together. Mush happiness to you all!
ReplyDeletexx
weeeee..*hugs hugs* hello sis Marie..thank you for always supporting me hehehe..I am still learning and thank you for appreciating it..love you sis Marie have a nice day ;)
DeleteOh sis.... this is soooooo wonderful!!! :) I love it! I know you can do great because you're very talented, I am happy this time it's really a double acrostic! Thumbs up!! :)Endless steps and fearless swings made us stay, oh wow! :) Wish I can sway that long too!LOL :)) Muaaaahhh.. Thanks for sharing! :) See, am a good girl now..:))
ReplyDeletehello ate Rosalinda..thank you..yes finally I have done it after editing it twice to cut my verses to lines just like what Ms.Fiona said hehehe..eeeeeeeee..ate I can't also sway that long hahaha..it is another way of saying holding on to love and surviving after each trial that comes their way..joke mo ako eh..kaw talaga..hehehe..thank you for reading it po ;)
DeleteVery nice. :)
ReplyDeletePlease find it in you to visit my blog.
Hello Hazel..welcome to my site..I saw you before on Clai's site..yes I'll definitely visit you too..thank you for your visit ;)
Deletelike the way you use the My eyes to make the poem- very well done.
ReplyDeleteHello Ms.Anjuli *hugs*..thank you ;)
DeleteIt is SO BEAUTIFUL, Sis Sie! I really love it and you did a wonderful job! Congratulations! I love the couple dancing ~ I've seen these images in YouTube videos and it always makes me smile :-)
ReplyDeleteThe quote included at the end has always been one of my favorites! I don't deserve the mention here because I didn't write one ~ I just passed along some instructions *big smiles* Sui deserves the credit on this one so I hope you give that to her :-) ~ Much Love ♥ Hugs ~
Hello Princess Fiona..it was so hard for me choosing the right pix for my short poem but I think I got the right one..oh ok ate Fiona I'll change it..*hugs hugs* ;)
DeleteVery nicely done, Sie! I was looking at your highlighted letters and figured it out...then I scrolled down and saw that I actually DID get it! ...AND the poetry was lovely!
ReplyDeleteHello Ms.Ann..weeeeeee..*hugs hugs*..thank you for always visiting me..I do appreciate it a lot seeing you here..thank you so much ;)
DeleteSuch beautiful words, beautiful poetry. You truly put my wretched so-called poetic verse to much shame, my Dear!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind comment on my blog today. :)
Hello Ms.Mara welcome to my site..I just started writing poems and I have still so much to learn..I love your site Ms.Mara..I'll go back I forgot to follow you heeeeeeeee..*hugs*n..thank you for visiting ;)
DeleteIt may be short but it's beautiful. And na gets ko sya kahit na slow ako when it comes to poems =)
ReplyDeleteMore more xoxo
Hello Krizzy..I'm glad you liked it..thank you for your visit *hugs* ;)
DeleteThis sentence you have mentioned "Live as though heaven is on earth" really brings so much of meaning and I simply love it.
ReplyDeleteI also love that line Ms.Nava..thank you for always visiting me..I truly appreciate it *hugs* ;)
Deletehi sie, this is really very innovative of you to come up with the right words and fitting them into the "poetic art"
ReplyDeletelately, i discovered through yourself and sagittarian, that there are sooo many poetic styles.. enjoyed myself reading them. by the way , i published your mayonnaise tip in my blog. many thanks for that. have a nice day dear
Hello Wan *waving hand*..thank you..it is my first time to try this form of poetry Wan..I am still learning..I'm glad you liked it..hehehe..ok I'll go to your site now..thank you Wan *hugs* ;)
Deletewow! that was so nice sissy. I love it much! an sweet ni sissy and beany oh. weeeeeeeeeee, keep the love burning hehe
ReplyDeletethank you sissy..sweet? ehe..that's what love can do hihihi..thank you for visiting sissy mwaaaaccchhhh ;)
DeleteSo lovely!
DeleteHello Jen..welcome to my site..thank you ;)
DeleteNice poem Ms.Sie I liked this phrase
ReplyDelete“Dance as though no one is watching you. Love as though you have never been hurt before. Sing as though no one can hear you. Live as though heaven is on earth.”
My bad Ms.Sie I don't know how to dance!!! :'(
Hello Sudhi..*hugs hugs*..I'll teach you how to dance..oh Beany can teach you..he dances well hehehe..thank you for your visit Sudhi ;)
DeleteOh my! That's my name there. After reading Fiona's comment on your acrostic at my blog as well as your comment on Balqis' blog, I was a little perplexed as to why your I was involved in your acrostic poem. I thought that I missed something when I read this post of yours and now I see what the reason is.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much for giving me credit. Although that was the first time I read your post, yet you included me in it. I am so very touched.
Of course my heartfelt thanks goes to Princesa Fiona for she is so humble to recognize this poetry form as being associated with my poems.
hehehe..thank you so much Sui..you are the Acrostic Queen so I might as well write your name there..weeeee..I have done my triple acrostic poem Sui but I'm still haunting for the right pix..thank you for reading it again ;)
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